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Review of chapter "parts 66 and 67 - the end." from (Current Donor)Listener
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I found these three stories to be pretty good. I totally bought into Willow and Cordelia, although I'm not sure your Alexander Dane was fully in-character in the first story.

If I had one suggestion, it would be for the third story to have a bit better resolution -- I didn't feel as though the Thermian plotline was fully resolved. Also, you kind of left Helm Laredo out in the cold (not that there was a lot about him in the actual film).

Overall, I enjoyed these.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 66 and 67 - the end." from Mordare
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Another one of you older stories I loved. Look forward to reading more of them,
Review By [Mordare] • Date [25 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 66 and 67 - the end." from ShyBob
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I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Pairing Willow and Alex was entertaining, although it reminds me of the Willow/Snape fetish far too many people indulge in... Guy's leadership of the security detail, along with all the other protagonists (except "Taggert") working with the Thermians to become better Starfleet? Spacefleet? personnel was true to the movie, and gave me hope for the Thermians. Maybe Willow can set up a school for them (without thestrals).
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [10 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 66 and 67 - the end." from (Current Donor)Katrina
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A great read and a great series! Awesome job! Thank you :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 66 and 67 - the end." from Dragonelf
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You have done a great job with this series and I hope you get inspired to add a new story or two to this series.

::Gives the plot bunny some Cabbage roll::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 66 and 67 - the end." from MarcusSLazarus
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I have to admit, I like this one a LOT better than the last one; a more action-orientated plot, a better opportunity for the characters to see each other in their ‘natural’ environments as they each save the world from their united villains in their own unique style, and some VERY interesting sequel potential at the end (After all, can you imagine how Xander and (Maybe) Andrew would react to learning that Angel and Willow (Cordelia’s more of a maybe after this) are dating members of the “Galaxy Quest” cast?).

I particularly liked seeing how the “Galaxy Quest” cast reacted to the news of Angel’s nature; the interaction between him and Gwen in particular was actually kind of cute, and the Thermians’ confusion over how to cope with a walking corpse that doesn’t show up in mirrors and- apart from lacking a pulse or body heat- walks and talks like a normal person was also well-portrayed.

Of course, the subsequent fight with the bad guys could have been longer, but hey; Angel gets to tear an alien warlord’s head off, so good times were had all around.

Admittedly, I think you could be a BIT less harsh on Jason in your writing- half the time you’re writing him he seems to have regressed to his pre-Thermian arrogance while the other half he seems to be the relatively decent guy he was at the end of the original film-, and I still think you could have included SOME reference to the age gap between Willow and Alex, but those details aside, the plot remained an interesting one.

Plus, as I said, the sequel potential you’ve laid for the next one looks like it could be interesting; you might not write it- particularly given the length of time that’s passed since you finished this story- but the potential’s there.

Keep up the good work!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [22 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 66 and 67 - the end." from dragon
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Once again, the lull before the storm .... or something. I do hope the muses ... the characters ... something.... wants to continue this universe. You have a real gift.

Well, back to work.
Review By [dragon] • Date [25 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 32 and 33" from dragon
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I am in awe. A little polishing in places, but your story line and characterization is right on. I am incredibly impressed. (ok, no cracks about dragons and impression ...) You have an incredible flair for the characters and for swiftly and sharply delineating scenes, reactions, emotions. dragon(brealthlessly trying to get through all of this before 5pm ..........)
Review By [dragon] • Date [24 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 66 and 67 - the end." from RevDorothyL
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Absolutely loved this fic and those that preceded it in this Galaxy Quest/BtVS/AtS crossover universe. I do hope that we haven't heard the last of the Princess, her Handmaiden, and their adventures with intergalactic friends?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 66 and 67 - the end." from azulkan
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Loved this fic and the first one as well. Is there going to be a sequel to the sequel? Know you are now a published writer but hope you don't plan on quiting fan fiction. Either way, good luck.
Jan aka azulkan(2)
Review By [azulkan] • Date [13 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 66 and 67 - the end." from MarcusRowland
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Nice ending - and leaves the way wide open for another sequel, of course. ;-)
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [13 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 64 and 65" from Artemis
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This is an awesome story! Just like the first story in this series, I have enjoyed both of them greatly. I think Angel and Gwen are the cutest, though Alex and Willow are a close second.

I hope that there'll be more to this story, I would love to find out what exactly that evil thing Cordy had a vision about is up to and how the rock-sticking will go. Cordy having such a blurry vision does make me wonder whether that implant the Thermians gave her somehow messes up her visions. And I wouldn't mind at all if some baddy decided to use Jason as a chew toy, he deserves that after being such a jerk to Cordelia.
Review By [Artemis] • Date [19 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 64 and 65" from MarcusRowland
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Nice - Angel with a rock in his chest, and the First rising. Wonder how those themes will combine...
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [12 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 62 and 63" from azulkan
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Woohoo...one of my favorite fics updated. Loved the twist at the end. Looking forward to the next part.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [9 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 62 and 63" from MarcusRowland
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Nice to see this continuing. Occurs to me that this is about the time the Bringers start murdering potentials in the mainstream Buffyverse, that could get VERY nasty for Gwen's family and friends.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [9 Dec 05] • Not Rated
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