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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Bwah-hahaha!!! Sometimes it is better to burn than regret!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [9 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Netchka
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Absolutely Love it. Can't wait for more. Should he keep Alexander? Defender of Man is still what he is going to be. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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Well, as happy as Xander the infant is trying to figure out if he'll suddenly remember being a twin if and when Dawn arrives, I can't help but wonder that children usually forget their past lives by the time they are two or three years old. But with Xander using his thoughts to reinforce what he needs to remember and do... I wish you and Xander luck. Glad he wants to save Faith and Tara as soon as possible. Maybe he can get Jana Calderesh to adopt them.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Neverwillmini
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I loved this, especially the closing bit!

For his name, it probably won't be anything too normal since they did pick 'Buffy' as a name for their daughter and they're living in what, 1988/1989 California? Maybe something from a popular movie/actor/song/singer during that time? Or a holdover from their wilder/hippyish youth (possibly Skye, Rowan, or some other 'nature' name)?
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
The idea of not continuing this wonderful story is criminal I tell you simply criminal. I love this and I do hope that you will consider possibly writing a sequel? Again I love this story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fyrloche
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Funny. Scott Summers brother was named Alex. Of course, you could have a really perverse (not perverted) sense of humour and call him Alexander Scott. Hank could be a closet X-man fanatic.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from missinglink
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For name, my inclination would be Dawn similar as the period would match and if Dawn were still to appear, they could be twins then. Thus with Dawn would be Ray as in Joyce's little Ray of sunshine. So sweet it will rot your teeth just thinking about it.

As for the ending, words cannot describe the endless belly laughs as the image of it all comes crashing down on the reader. Great setup for that joke and my only response would be Xander the baby with a milk moustache with the first words of "Got Milk?" causing Joyce to shriek and accidentally drop the Xander baby causing infant amnesia and stopping all of Xander's plans for future changing. Thus you enter the twilight zone ending.

Would be interesting to see your other ideas or carry overs of this idea. We see lots of resets, but not many if any that go this far. Xander baby keeps seeming to forget that while he may have ideas and intel on the future, he in no ways is going to be capable of carrying out said plans without the adult body he just departed.

Will be fun if you give more, but thanks again for a great little bit of work here.
Review By [missinglink] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banner
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This is nothing but fun. This could actually be one of the best "do-over" setups ever. It has it all - a highly appealing, truly *heroic* hero, a sense of fun, ruthlessness and a willingness to get his hands dirty. Especially, no wimpy whining or aggravating refusal to engage.

Good stuff, all of it. I do hope you continue this one.
Review By [banner] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and very funny redo, but since it is still Xander the question is, what will happen to his lusting for Buffy?
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
ROTFLMAO!

Talk about an odepius complex.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from micedden
Review:
Love it's would love to see more.
He's name could be Hank Summers Jr.
Review By [micedden] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kumoatsu
Review:
wow, dude this is the best story beginning that I have read in a really long time. while you have told use that you aren't going to continue this I have only this to say, please please please write this you can skip lots of time at a pop or just over view it and hit the funny spot such as being discovered as a genius in the maths and sciences. or better yet studying magic from the age of three some how some way. seriously though please continue to write this incredable idea out!
Review By [Kumoatsu] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrotherBludgeon
Review:
This might be a bit of a bummer,
Without Dawn, his new name quite dumber
Isn't it just his luck?
Shares his name with a duck,
His name's "Donald," a.k.a Don Summers

(There, my review rhymed, are you happy!?
Though this idea, to me, seems crappy
Why, on feedback we leave,
Rhyme-schemes we must conceive?
...
Sorry. When I'm annoyed, I get snappy)
Review By [BrotherBludgeon] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from oldgirllost
Review:
Big Xander's shrunk into the world of a baby
His mind trapped in the worlds of maybe
The only next chapter out of this fix
Would be to leap ahead to perhaps six
Even them to attempt the schemes listed he should not dare
His infant brain hasn't the developmental hardware.

Good story loved it.
Need more of it.
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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