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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Studyofchaos
Review:
I don't know if you still check your reviews, but all I can say is wow. Great story, great series. I really hope you come back to this some day.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
An interesting story with a hard and sharp edge. Got any more?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from AngelBlack
Review:
This story is WAY too good to leave hanging so please... don't. Your writing is exactly as Simon Green's is too! PLEASE CONTINUE!
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from JonnyNapalm
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You've got a real feel for Green's storytelling style, and the Noir works really well with the Buffy-verse. Hope that there's still inspiration for this story for you, I eagerly anticipate Xander running into Psycho Suzie. She's always a fun character and if she's around craziness is sure to follow. Still, I was hoping that Xander would run into his OWN Suzie style character in Faith. They both have similar temperaments, and broken pasts, and Suzie found someone willing to accept all her flaws in John. In this style of story Xander would likely see so many similar elements in Faith's character he'd be more drawn to her than John was to Suzie. Just a thought. Hope you're still inspired. Great writing.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [11 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
Pretty good series you have here. Just finished reading both parts and I enjoyed them. I hope to see more.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Orchamus
Review:
Dude, what happened to this? Was doin so good, is it done?
Comments from author:
Don't worry, this isn;t dead by far. Just after having the chapters wiped from my hardrive not once, but twice, I needed to step back. I'm working on it again, slowly with multiple backups, and will start updating soon...ish. Focusing on my other story at the moment, but, it's given me even better ideas of Agents of Grey. Thanks for checking in on it though.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Ansku
Review:
Great going :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Looks like the reviewers' consensus is on Susie showing up. Enjoying this immensely :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DavidFraser
Review:
Haven't read any of the Nightside books, but you are tempting me...

Good writing of your story so far... Looking forward ?
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from nemogbr
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Looking forward to interaction with Suzie...lol
Shouldn't Xander be using a different colour coat by now? A black one perhaps? Would give him a different look compared to Taylor.

I thought he would have rescued Amy like how Taylor rescued Cathy.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [19 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Tariq
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As a long time Simon Green fan you've nicely fulfilled one of my wishes for a well written Nightside series. After seeing the sterling work you've been doing on this I don't suppose you fancy doing a Deathstalker series next and nicely rounding out the set?

And considering what John's memories would likely have imparted about Suzie I'm not surprised about the shock, but I wouldn't have pegged the 'Oh Christ It's Her, Run' moniker to be the first one to come to his mind. But I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Review By [Tariq] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from BlueGold
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“Oh Christ, it’s her. Run.” - Well Hello Suzie! Though I wonder what she's doing there I have been really enjoying this and the first story in the series. I love the way you are integrating parts of the Nightside and the Hellmouth.

Though I am also concerned about what side Angel(us) is on.

All in all I find this really enjoyable and am looking forward to more.
Review By [BlueGold] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from williamstarr
Review:
I love this concept, and I can't express how happy making it is that your continuing to explore it. Excellent work, very well done so far. You've done an incredible job of keeping the feel and atmosphere of the Nightside books.

I have to admit that your handling of the Angel/Angelus birthday surprise (if it has been averted instead of temporarily delayed) is probably one of my all time favorites.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks a lot for the nice words. I'm trying to not lose the Buffy voice, which is hard at times with keeping with the Nightside tone. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Truth be told, that was one of my favorite ideas in this story. I wanted to flesh it out but to do that would set the timeline of the story too far back for what I wanted.

Thanks again.
Review By [williamstarr] • Date [17 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Chap 2:
--out of their ... Most of them where
there .. were
--Even Ms. Calendars ... John Taylors name ... Giles small office
Calendar's .. Taylor's .. Giles' .. Especially scan Chap 3 for this mistake

Chap 3:
--was sure we would have fallen forward
he
--held a yellow legal pad as he taped the edge of a pen against the paper.
tapped... HA! :D

Chap 5: --undo risk : undue

Whoa! Nice Giles backstory :)
Heh, I love Xander's reaction to Jenny's question about Cathy.
Good use of Amy. Great rendition of Oz.
Comments from author:
First off, God damn it! No matter how often I use the spell/grammar check and re-read everything, I keep missing things. So, the second thing is thank you for finding and pointing out these problems. I'm going re-re-re-go over the second and third chapters again. One of these days I'll catch all of my mistakes...OK, that's a lie.

Thanks for taking a look and, despite the grammar issues, glad you're enjoying it. Oz is a hard to write in my opinion so he may seem...off at times. Should be a new update pretty soon though. Thanks again.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [16 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Awww, I thought Xander was going to reverse the spell so the demons would be immune to attacks by the newly vulnerable humans.

HAH! I love the idea of Angel's rush home with Buffy being interrupted by radically 'misplaced' threshold barrier :D

The bone is a very John artifact. Nice placement :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [16 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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