glad that Harry has a better life now...
can`t wait to read more ^__^

Interesting story. I'm looking forward to more eventually :)

Chapter 1

just as we know the Dursley's

Chapter 2

hmm...I would like to have read the conversation......

Chapter 3

still curios how Gibbs got guardianship over Harry....

Chapter 4

poor Harry.......

Chapter 5

uahh meeting Abbey....again poor Harry *g*

Chapter 6

nice meeting the team........

Chapter 7

he had the Dursleys arrested? lol..a shame you didn't wrote about that....

Chapter 8

nice to read about a happy Harry.
Dumbledork will be surprised after his talk with the zoo animals
And even thinking about using a child to hurt someone else is sick, I hope he will
hurt a lot in the future...


Chapter 9

huhh? Gibbs already had the papers for adopting Harry so why is that brought up now
as still not being happened?
I hope Harry tells someone about seeing that guy several times.

if the lurker - guy strikes, Harry's accidental magic will likely come into play to defend him. Could be fun. This is going to be a very different HP come age 11....

Uh oh.
Can't wait for more!

ps: you're posting this on ff.net too, aren't you? but under another name.

Good job on the update, I hope you'll add more soon. Though there were two grammar mistakes in it.

-When will the "Harry Potter" aspects come more into play?

Very interesting set up. I'm having trouble with the idea of a good Dumbledore, but I'm willing to wait and see.

This is getting a lot more interesting. Harry when he gets to Hogwarts is going to be extremely difficult for Snape or anyone else to push around and I can't wait. Say nothing of the fact that Dumbledore won't be able to manipulate him.

I love those two characters to death, but their flaws were enormous. Imperfect bastards...le sigh.

Harry's life would be filled with danger if he had been raised as originally intended. Having the head investigator of NCIS as a father isn't going to put him into danger that he would have been able to avoid. Knowing how Gibbs lost his wife and daughter, he might start feeling that it would be too dangerous for him to have a child. I hope Harry mentions to someone that he has seen this man lurking around.

OOooh! Looks like some of Gibbs' enemies are starting to show up and make their moves. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Great update with a fun hyper Harry.

Uh oh, have a feeling something bad is on the horizon. Hope Harry has a chance to tell Gibbs about seeing the guy.

Wonderful! I can't wait for more!

Excellent story. I'm looking forward to reading more. The only concern I have is that you not write SuperSmart!Harry as I feel it is out of character. An eidetic memory is a good reason for him *knowing* many things and learning languages easily, but being able to recall everything you read is not the same as understanding it. But it is, of course, your story.

"I decided to try and make a story that had a good Dumbledore, let’s see how it goes"
But I like _bad_ Dumbledore! ;P

im very interested in both harry's first manifestation(s) of magic and how the whole altered citizenship thing will be handled