Chapters 13 and 14 seem to contradict Chapter 16. In Chapter 13, Joe admits to already knowing about vampires, but in Chapter 16, Adam and Faith talk about getting a vampire minion to convince Joe that demons are real. Faith tells Giles about being kidnapped in Chapter 14 and then reveals it all over again in Chapter 16. This story is interesting, especially the explanation of where Immortals come from, but you might want to edit out the contradictions.
Review of chapter "Glimmers of Starlight" from RevDorothyL
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Nice to have things become clearer, and this possible explanation for where Immortals come from is fascinating. Plus, Adam's determination to stick with Faith, no matter what, is a nice reminder of one of his most attractive qualities.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glimmers of Starlight" from Unseentraveler
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Another great story, But then I have yet to read one of your stories that isn't great. I really hope you update this one again soon. As I really like the Faith/Methos pairing and there are so few.
Review By [Unseentraveler] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One for the Books" from Darksidhe
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Yes! An update! I love this story. Faith is one of my favorite BtVS characters and Methos (Adam) is my favorite Highlander character. Looking forward to reading more.
Review By [Darksidhe] • Date [15 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Starlight Calling" from VillageOrchid
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I'm glad that she confided in Giles and that Giles showed compassion and wisdom.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Starlight Calling" from RevDorothyL
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I continue to love your INTELLIGENT Faith (who figures things out -- such as the likelihood that the infected unCalled Potential had probably lit out on her own to avoid friendly fire -- and learns languages, etc.). Faith was never stupid, but she never got much credit for brain power as opposed to muscle power in canon, and I enjoy seeing her developed further here.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "More Stars in Heaven" from VillageOrchid
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I'm enjoying this and hope that things turn out well. Faith won't be happy if she permanently looks like one of those Efreets.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wishing on a Star" from VillageOrchid
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I think that Adam admitted to being Death, but never mentioned Methos.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Interesting foreshadowing without telling too much. We don't know if she's transforming, if her slayerness will protect her, or leave her.
Comments from author:
Why would what's happening happen all at once? there's also the possibility that Faith being a Slayer throws a kink into things, changing it from normal.
Besides, telling everything all at once ruins the suspense : )
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "BS8: Encyclopedia Demonica" from VillageOrchid
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Giles knows she has an expert in ancient languages living with her? Also some clue as to the generic hot-spot city or more details would be nice.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Not Rated