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Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Thoughts and shirts" from locard
Review:
This is a great story and it is such a shame that you seem to have dropped it. I hope you will pick it back up again.
Review By [locard] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Thoughts and shirts" from LunasMeow
Review:
A shame that you didn't continue this fic...
Review By [LunasMeow] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Thoughts and shirts" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
Interesting. I look forward to where you take this.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of story "Life is but an Illusion" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Thanks for the update!

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Typos I've spotted. Typos in brackets.


The Scoobies looked at each other, most of them shrugged or [shool] their heads.

Should be

shook


Giles took of his glasses, pinched the bridge of his nose and muttered, "Dear Lord." All eyes turned on him, "Giles what's wrong? You know, [everytime] you say these two words, [ti] feels like the world is going to end again," Willow questioned him.

Should be

every time

it

Open Office, a freeware program, has a spellchecker.
All the typos I spotted would probably have been spotted with it.
Comments from author:
Got it, thanks. Like I've mentioned in the author's notes, I'm just too content right now, I normally don't make these kinds of mistakes. So, thank you again.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Christmas and arguments" from CPTSkip
Review:
You've added even more questions! Lol! I look forward to more of your story with additional anticipation.
Comments from author:
Thank you, thank you. Don't worry I have a whole time-line lined up for this story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Memories and exposition" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am liking your story a whole lot. But, darn, what have got against poor Dawn? Couldn't you have had a toilet out of an old Soviet space station fall on her head instead? I do look forward to more of your interesting story. I just hope Xander isn't a Big Bad.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: death of an alarm clock" from Walegrin
Review:
Interesting start. Curious as to which version of Watchers that they're dealing with.

'Faith began to languishly kiss her girlfriend,' I think you meant languidly?
Comments from author:
Thank you, all better now.
Review By [Walegrin] • Date [21 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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