Review of chapter "The Comfort We Seek" from Luna
She tasted different now, like Dean, his tongue licked every corner of her mouth, chasing the taste of his big brother away.--- ha, I like the way you described that.
Buffy gasped and tilted her head back, braid shifting to graze the ground underneath them--- damn, that’s like ‘Wish’!Buffy-length hair!
Nice. Buffy is one LUCKY lady ;)
Review By [Luna
] • Date [21 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Comfort We Seek" from Iceflame
Well done for a short piece, but left me kinda hoping to see a fully fleshed out epic coming in the future >:).
Review By [Iceflame
] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Comfort We Seek" from DoubleKross
Interesting.... hot, but too short! I would love to see where this goes.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Sorry you thought it was short, but that was really all the muse wanted to give me for that scene.
Review By [DoubleKross
] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Not Rated