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Review of chapter "Frank Burns" from (Current Donor)

Review:

That slippery slope, it has an 80 degree pitch with a stainless steel slide anda 2 inch coating of petroleum gelly. Going down!?!

Comments from author:

Well Angel has already taken the elevator, not like he needs much more help in getting to is final destination.

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nerfherder] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Kinsey" from jamielnorris

Review:

i object for kinsey to be from Indiana i thought he was from California but otherwise damn good story keep up the good work
Jamie

p.s. i live in Indiana

Comments from author:

According to stargate wiki he's from your state sorry to destroy your hope in California. I personally thought he should have been from Georgia with his southern boy ways.

Review By [jamielnorris] • Date [12 May 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Kinsey" from (Current Donor)

JanessaRavenwood

Review:

Minor nitpick - you've spelled the Senator's name as both "Kinsey" and "Kinsley" in this chapter. The former is, of course, correct. See the link below. Otherwise, good chapter.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robert_Kinsey#Robert_Kinsey

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JanessaRavenwood] • Date [9 May 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Shredder" from TaleWeaver

Review:

Just a thought... don't know if you watch any anime? Have you ever seen or read the manga of 'Hayate the combat butler'? Because if you don't have all the prospective client slots filled... I could see Nagi coming to Angel and the gang to get Hayate both legally and mystically emancipated from his douche parents - so they couldn't sign away his soul to pay their gambling debts as well as his internal organs.

Comments from author:

Not a big anime person I'm afraidm so Ive never heard of the series. Sorry.

Review By [TaleWeaver] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Shredder" from (Current Donor)

Luna

Review:

"Not a turtle," he muttered to himself as he calmed down slightly.
*snort* ;)

Comments from author:

C'mon you know that Lorne is very much apart of the Green Machine.

Review By [ (Current Donor)

Luna] • Date [17 Apr 10] • Not Rated

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