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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
amusing story ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun, with Catherine totally in character and Brass was definitely in a wise-ass mood.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwoBlackDragons
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“No, that dumbass is already counting the icebergs on Lake Mead. There was serious consideration over adding Richardson and Bailey to that job until everyone’s retirement, except they still swear on a dozen polygraphs that she didn’t leave by the balcony. So, where the hell did she go?”

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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lake_Mead

Lake Mead National Recreation Area is run by the National Park Service (feds) not LVPD who are Clark County cops.

BTW it's about 8 miles due west of where I live.


Yeah, I'm being sort of nitpicky but CSI:Vegas gets alot of local stuff wrong and it's a pet peeve of mine.
Comments from author:
Never underestimate the power of an embarrassed bureaucracy. "Congratulations, you're the permanent liaison. Trade in your badge and gun for a Smokey the Bear hat. 'Bye."

Thanks for the correction, anyway!
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [18 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from grundy
Review:
Poor Catherine sounds really frustrated. Xander sounds like he's enjoying the situation way too much. Well done!
Review By [grundy] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nemogbr
Review:
This one definitely needs more chapters. Catherine Willows has one daughter, Lindsey Willows. What if she is a potential or becomes an activated Slayer?

Hope your muse gives you a prod and get you to write more Xander/Catherine Willows...lol
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Very funny, any chance of elaborating on this one?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Very funny, but I thought Willows was a blonde, and therefore Xander could make a one liner about being used to angry judgmental blonds.
Comments from author:
She's had her hair in various colors througout the series, but I'm most familiar with her as a redhead, so that's what I used.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mamodo
Review:
Hmm... somehow I think that Xander knows just to well what to do with angry redheads.
Review By [Mamodo] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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