Do you mind if I squeal like a twelve year-old girl right now? Oh, you don't; great! Eeeeee! Seriously, I'm always a fan of melding these two wonderful universes but when Buffy's at the helm I swear my heart tingles from all the die-hard excitement. This beginning feels full of promise, promise of Buffy's quirky one liners and Dean's dirty innuendos and badass-ORGINAL/NUMERO1-slayer ass-kickage. I can't wait to see how the plot will develop in the next chapter. Those Winchesters don't know what the hell they're in for and I'd be lying if I said that isn't half the fun!
Review By [pensivegal] • Date [6 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I was a little confused at first as the majority of it just seemed to be a written version of the episode, but I liked how you introduced Buffy to the storyline. And having her pick up Dean by the lapels - classic! Got a good giggle out of me.
It was very well written - except you seemed to slip into present tense a couple of times.
All in all, a great start. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this
Comments from author:
Yeah, I liked the lapel part myself! Yeah, I'm really trying with the tense thing, it's always been my weakest writing point.
Review By [Angellia] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Good start, looking forward to more. Will you be taking her through to the season finale?
Comments from author:
It is my intention. I'm also not sure if that's where I will be stopping. Getting in some extra chapters here and there so there is less time between updates as well!
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Angellia