Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

The Last Son and the Slayer Part 4

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five: Epilogue" from JonnWolfe
Review:
Read this series straight through from start to finish. Lovely story. Part was hard to read, but that was solely what the First did to them to split them up for a while. Saw a lot of TV and film quotes that had me either laughing or cringing, but that was all good. Love your tweaking of both universes. Angel's non-shanshu was rather inspired, as was Cordy's Slayerification.

Things I have questions about:
1) Post story and second power up, is Buffy 'Superwoman' with costume and everything? Cool if true, and a description of the costume would be neat.

2) Faith/Xander and Angel/Cordy: Children and playmates for Karen?

3) I know you said it was the end, but Honestly... Now that there's SuperBuffy, pregnant Dawn, and everything, it'd be nice if there were a few stories set after the Epilogue that show how the others are doing. Not necessarily 'Big Bad' worthy ones where life and death are called into question, but ones that show 'Mini Bads' and how Clark/Buffy gets things done as well.

4) Dumb Question: Did Buffy get a Kryptonian name? Can see Clark insisting on Anne-El or something like that... hehehe

5) Did Buffy gain Kryptonite weakness to go with everything else?

6) I can see a short story or long chapter worth of Buffy interacting with the Jor-El computer, in a Q&A session of her biology, lifespan, and possible Genetic Manipulation to enhance both.... not to mention an Abbreviated version of Kryptonian Education. Wasn't a question, but more of a request there...

7) Can you relate what changes the Legion found on their return trip to the 31st Century?

That's all I can think of right now. Will congratulate you on this series, because despite the inevitable typos and grammar blips, this was a truly wonderful series.

Loved every bit of it!
Comments from author:
1) Buffy could be i guess. I never gave it much thought and preferred to leave it unsaid.

2) Sure.

3) Like all my stories if i can think of an idea i'll write it.

4) Never thought on it but yeah he may have given her one...a really silly sounding one just to annoy her.

5) You're really good at asking questions i never gave much consideration too. I would say yes only not as severe as Clark's.

6) If my muse ever gets off his lazy butt i'll think about it.

7) Probably nothing significant. Clark lived as he was suppose to so i would think there would only be minor changes to the history of the Legion's world.

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed my story.
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five: Epilogue" from nataliaavo
Review:
An absolutely amazing story. I love every little detail. I hope you do another one with the Clark/Buffy.
Comments from author:
Thanks. If an idea strikes me I might write another one but for the moment I'm afraid i've moved on to other subjects.
Review By [nataliaavo] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five: Epilogue" from Tempi
Review:
A great series that I really enjoyed reading. I look forward to reading other stories from you.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Tempi] • Date [24 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five: Epilogue" from Mordare
Review:
Thanks for the great story. Loved it the whole way through. :D
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five: Epilogue" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Good story. Hate to see it end. Would have loved to see Superman wailing on Darkseid after he goes after Buffy.
Comments from author:
It would be great to see Supes wail on Darkseid but this is the place i wanted to end my story. Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five: Epilogue" from cwolf
Review:
I had issues with enjoying due to the switches between past and present tenses in the same events. Having present tense talking/thinking about events where it was past tense, maybe.

But the way these were written, if it were a novel being sold on shelves, the editors would keep sending it back until it was corrected.

Other than that, i liked the ending.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Three: The Source is the End" from firedrakegirl
Review:
I'm excited to see Buffy hive Clark a piece of her mind for stealing her bit! This was a great chapter, and, as usual, I can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Well we'll see if she decides to do that or if other things distract her.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Two: Alien vs Goddess Round 3" from firedrakegirl
Review:
Dude, didja have to end it there?! I want more! This is such a great series!
Comments from author:
Yes i did have to end it there because i'm a cruel person who likes to make his readers suffer. #Insert evil laugh here.#

You'll get more as soon i can write it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Two: Alien vs Goddess Round 3" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Definitely don't think I'd want to have to make that choice. But after a couple minutes of considering the two possible futures...I think I'd save Chloe. To me, Dark Willow is a worse fate because she was a friend at one point and it's always harder to fight a friend. Does that make any sense?
Comments from author:
It does make sense. What i'll say is that foretold is forewarned. Clark and Buffy knew this was coming so in a flashback i'll reveal that they talked about this and how that talk leads Buffy to ending up making her choice. There's your little spoiler for the next chapter.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Two: Alien vs Goddess Round 3" from justapiranha
Review:
I really hope you have an update waiting to post with-in a few days, because waiting any longer will just be mean.
Comments from author:
Can't make any promises but i'll see what i can do.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One: The Battle Joined" from drago
Review:
Whats even more impressive is the fact the clothing they wear during these battles, explosions and a huge ass fireball stayes in tact.
Comments from author:
Well for the comics the reason why is obvious. You have to maintain decency. Sure it probably defies several laws of physics but then again i'm writing a story about an invulnerable alien who can fly on top of everything else and then magic is real and you get the idea. The whole world is fantasy.

Thanks for adding an review.
Review By [drago] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One: The Battle Joined" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Woot! Liked how you gave Buffy some classic lines from the movies/shows. Good thing she said them or we'd have people like the Joker in Metropolis, and that would be very unpleasant at the moment.
Comments from author:
It's funny sometimes what occurs to you when you're writing. Yeah i think the gang have enough problems without other villains dropping in.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One: The Battle Joined" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Where were we? We were about to see a beat-down! And I can't believe I actually used that phrase.
Comments from author:
Yes but whose beat-down? Cythonna will not be going down easily and if need be she'll take the whole city with her. Our heroes have their work cut out.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One: The Battle Joined" from Tempi
Review:
Excellent chapter. I look forward to reading the climax of the whole Cythonna story line.

Unless you're planning a Clark-Buffy-Diana love triangle, my bet would be a Batman/WW pairing.
Comments from author:
Well after the climax of this i'll be winding the story down so i won't be writing anything about love triangles.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty: The Warrior Princess" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Nice handling of Diana's training. Am I wrong to be worried that somebody will try to make a move on Clark?
Comments from author:
You might want to be worried because before this story ends I'll hint at strongly that the Olympians or at least some of them won't be carrying on that policy of non-interference so Clark may be having to fend off the advances of lustful deities in the not too distant future.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Page: 1 of 4 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking