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Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Training According to Oromis" from WmGeorge
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I decided to read this even though I'm unfamiliar with Eragon, simply because I love Xander. This story has already captivated and intrigued me. I do hope you continue with this. I've thoroughly enjoyed what I've read thus far.
Review By [WmGeorge] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Training According to Oromis" from justmeherenobodyelse
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Brom *lies*. The first day is *not* the hardest. Doing the same thing all over gain with aching muscles and bruises and blisters on days 2-4 is the hardest. Poor Xander!
Review By [justmeherenobodyelse] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Training According to Oromis" from silvergaurd
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Great new chapter. Hope to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Inquisition and Introduction" from nightslayer
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intresting
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Inquisition and Introduction" from kellincried
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ummm, Okay I admit it's been a while since I read the books or saw the film even, but was Saphira Eragon's dragon? And wasn't Brom's dragon killed in the first war? Or am I just all kinds of confused? Other than that I'm really enjoying the story. Good Work!
Comments from author:
Saphira is Eragon's dragon, but Brom's dragon was also named Saphira and she was killed in the First War but since this takes place before the Fall, she is alive and well and Brom's dragon. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [kellincried] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Inquisition and Introduction" from silvergaurd
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love the fic, don't know much about eragon, but I'm interested in this fic, how about xander pairs with oromis or the leader guy?
Hope to see more
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Inquisition and Introduction" from lillyb
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great work, I like the way your building this story. will Xan be getting his very own dragon?
Comments from author:
I think so. I'm gonna start taking votes on dragons next chapter and see what kind of results I get and then decide. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [lillyb] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Another Night Another Battlefield" from musiclover
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i dont mind anything but with xan id like him to be with eragon but i dont know what you have planed so its however you chose
intresting
Review By [musiclover] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Another Night Another Battlefield" from silvergaurd
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interesting start. Hope to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Another Night Another Battlefield" from lillyb
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good job. so is Xander seeing a young Brom? and if so will this impact the course of the first dragon war i.e. the purge.
Comments from author:
Xander has just met with a young Brom and yes this will impact the First Dragon War, however the impact will likely be understated, subtlety is a good thing! I'm glad you like it so far, thanks for reviewing!
Review By [lillyb] • Date [30 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Another Night Another Battlefield" from LNR
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Excellent. More Please.
Review By [LNR] • Date [30 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Another Night Another Battlefield" from Tabee
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Nice beginning!

Maybe someday I'll actually finish Eragon... at least so I know who is who!

Can't wait to see what happens next, thanks for sharing and happy writing!

Tabee :)
Review By [Tabee] • Date [30 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Another Night Another Battlefield" from kayron
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I think that Xander is in Sword and Sorcery land, and while he is used to a 'modern' version of this kind of fight, Xander is going to have to learn how to really fight to be able to survive. I just hope that he just got picked up by one of the good guys.
Review By [kayron] • Date [30 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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