I absolutely loved it! I do hope there more.. or someday will be.
It's intriguing and oh so promising. :D
Congrats and kudos!

Why is there no more? ^^; And why was Spike oddly sympathetic? Heh, the White Knight is Cole's son. *grins*

Because muses are tricky things and mine happens to hate me? Seriously though, I'll try to write some more when I feel I can. And spike being sympathetic in on a theory of mine, a theory that says that Spike's father was completely unknown to him. I don't know, his story just gave me that vibe. And yes, the White Knight is the Source's son. I found it amusing forever, though I figured it was just me since I'm a total dork. :D I'm glad you liked it!

Oh the irony! lol Should have known u would have chosen Cole to be daddy dearest. lol

Yes, the irony is always the best part, isn't it?

Cute I love Cole being Xander's father.

I'm glad :D

Actually that wasn't half bad for a one shot. I've written worse. You did great!

Thank you very much!

Nice idea! And, well, as demons go Cole's not that bad...

Thanks! And Cole is a very complicated demon so I figured him being the father of a very complicated demon magnet made sense.

LMAO! Xander belongs to Cole! LOL

Lol, that is a pretty interesting thought. :D

I love short stories that leave such an impact. I hate short stories that leave such an impact because I always want more! Great job!

Thank you!

Please let there be a sequel!!!

As I have told a few others, I might do small drabbles in this verse.

You are right, the end doesn't live up to the rest.

I don't like Charmed stories, and most crosses, but this really appeals to me and I'd like to see more if the bunny bites.

I'm glad you liked it despite the ending and I hope that if I continue you will still like it.

Well it explains the demon being drawn to him.

Lol, yep. That's one of the main reasons I picked Cole.

Wow! A whole new reason for Xander to be a demon magnate! Balthezore is his father! Talk about a shock!

I know, lol. That was my thought when I was writing it.

Please tell me you are not going to just leave us hanging there!

Ok, so I understand how you might not want to turn a short piece into a 264 thousand chapter epic, but a father son talk with some awkward advice on dating "...and that's how you avoid being sacrificed on the first date." Xander's father said. "Honestly once you are past the sacrifice/mate and then feed you to their young part it can be great."

Or maybe some kind words on how to deal with/avoid/take advantage of possession.

I liked the story.

I might continue it, maybe add another chapter of the "Your father's a demon." Talk and then just some random drabbles of their relationship. I'm still not sure though.