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Meeting Daddy Dearest

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from msdarque
Review:
I absolutely loved it! I do hope there more.. or someday will be.
It's intriguing and oh so promising. :D
Congrats and kudos!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from calikocat
Review:
Why is there no more? ^^; And why was Spike oddly sympathetic? Heh, the White Knight is Cole's son. *grins*
Comments from author:
Because muses are tricky things and mine happens to hate me? Seriously though, I'll try to write some more when I feel I can. And spike being sympathetic in on a theory of mine, a theory that says that Spike's father was completely unknown to him. I don't know, his story just gave me that vibe. And yes, the White Knight is the Source's son. I found it amusing forever, though I figured it was just me since I'm a total dork. :D I'm glad you liked it!
Review By [calikocat] • Date [23 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DannyMasters
Review:
Oh the irony! lol Should have known u would have chosen Cole to be daddy dearest. lol
Comments from author:
Yes, the irony is always the best part, isn't it?
Review By [DannyMasters] • Date [19 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from goldenspringtime
Review:
Cute I love Cole being Xander's father.
Comments from author:
I'm glad :D
Review By [goldenspringtime] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Genuka
Review:
Actually that wasn't half bad for a one shot. I've written worse. You did great!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)MyTia
Review:
Nice idea! And, well, as demons go Cole's not that bad...
Comments from author:
Thanks! And Cole is a very complicated demon so I figured him being the father of a very complicated demon magnet made sense.
Review By [(Past Donor)MyTia] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
LMAO! Xander belongs to Cole! LOL
Comments from author:
Lol, that is a pretty interesting thought. :D
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from shdwslayer
Review:
I love short stories that leave such an impact. I hate short stories that leave such an impact because I always want more! Great job!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [shdwslayer] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Nikolaos
Review:
Please let there be a sequel!!!
Comments from author:
As I have told a few others, I might do small drabbles in this verse.
Review By [Nikolaos] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
You are right, the end doesn't live up to the rest.

I don't like Charmed stories, and most crosses, but this really appeals to me and I'd like to see more if the bunny bites.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it despite the ending and I hope that if I continue you will still like it.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
Well it explains the demon being drawn to him.
Comments from author:
Lol, yep. That's one of the main reasons I picked Cole.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
Wow! A whole new reason for Xander to be a demon magnate! Balthezore is his father! Talk about a shock!
Comments from author:
I know, lol. That was my thought when I was writing it.
Review By [kayron] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from norgco
Review:
Please tell me you are not going to just leave us hanging there!

Ok, so I understand how you might not want to turn a short piece into a 264 thousand chapter epic, but a father son talk with some awkward advice on dating "...and that's how you avoid being sacrificed on the first date." Xander's father said. "Honestly once you are past the sacrifice/mate and then feed you to their young part it can be great."

Or maybe some kind words on how to deal with/avoid/take advantage of possession.

I liked the story.
Comments from author:
I might continue it, maybe add another chapter of the "Your father's a demon." Talk and then just some random drabbles of their relationship. I'm still not sure though.
Review By [norgco] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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