Freaking brilliant!!! Such an unusual idea, but can just see the mayhem that Dawn would cause on the Island. Jack would be really protective and Dougall would be the perfect play mate. Really do hope you continue.
I stand in complete stupification with my mouth open and drooling on myself. What a terrific, but very very strange, beginning. I hope you write more stories set in this insane universe. This one amused the heck out of me.
This is awesome! I think that Jack could take out Glory with one hand tied behind his back. All that would have to happen would be for her to stand between him and drink!
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated