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Review of chapter "Back in the ring" from goldenspringtime
Review:
Very interesting story I love the transformation of their relationship from rough to lighter.
Review By [goldenspringtime] • Date [19 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back in the ring" from Elleria
Review:
Love this series.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dinner" from wackyninja
Review:
squee! he's meeting the Cohens!
So what's he going to do for money now? and awesome boon for Ryan.
Review By [wackyninja] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "WTF?" from Paintsy
Review:
WTF? is right! No, No, No, why did you take Xander's eyes? How is he going to function in the real world? I was hoping that it was all metaphysical. Even if its not, nice chapter, and keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I just sort of figured that Xander wouldn't mess with magic lightly and would want to be the price up front (instead of it biting him in the ass later).

Unfortunately, it isn't metaphysical and Xander really doesn't have eyes anymore.

In my defense, I didn't mean to take Xander's last eye from him. That chapter just sort of wrote itself. I'm glad you are still enjoying the story. Another chapter will be up tomorrow.
Review By [Paintsy] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introductions" from Paintsy
Review:
Ok, wow, what a good description of a magic EVENT, and how it can just take you somewhere else. I wonder what it was for? And, that was supposed to be simple? Great chapter!
Comments from author:
I meant for it to be simple. Just a little dancing and some chanting? I guess even 'easy' magic turns out complicated.

Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it.
Review By [Paintsy] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introductions" from wackyninja
Review:
damn cliffy!
so? what happens?
Comments from author:
I didn't mean for it to be a cliffhanger! I'm sorry. I'll be posting the next chapter tomorrow.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [wackyninja] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introductions" from nightowl
Review:
No fair stopping there. What happens next? Great story but the ending is to abrupt. Hope you add more soon.
Comments from author:
I didn't mean for the ending to be abrupt or to leave anyone dangling. Sorry!

New chapter will be up tomorrow morning. Thanks for the review.
Review By [nightowl] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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