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Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from nicktorilove
Review:
Very good story. I like a whole idea of it and hope that the writing bug for this story hasn't left you.
Review By [nicktorilove] • Date [15 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from Kalliza
Review:
Eeeep! That's sorta a horrible place to leave off! I want to see how it gets resolved! I hope this story gets picked back up. I rather like the Xander/Graham pairing.
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from midnight
Review:
wow
update soon
Review By [midnight] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from serenityselena
Review:
oh dear ....
everything is so messed up ....
hope things will be cleared up soon...
hope to read more of this story in the near future ^_^
Comments from author:
Very, very messy. I am the cleaner from here on out... pretty sure. Really pretty sure about the cleaning and sorting it out.
I have a beta and lots written I have not abandoned or forgotten this story.

Thank-you for reading!!!
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [5 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from silvergaurd
Review:
aww poor xan... can't wait to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from BlackRose
Review:
Oh I just want to hide under my covers until everything works out. Poor Evan, poor Xander. I do love how protective the scoobes are of Evan.
Comments from author:
You won't have to hide for long they're going to be fixed, I promise!

Thanks for reading! :D
Review By [BlackRose] • Date [7 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from lothlorien
Review:
damn... the scobies need to take a chill pill and start listening to each other instead of jumping to wrong conclusions. i hope xander and graham work things out soon. please post the next chapter soon
Comments from author:
Thank-you so much for reading, and I can promise you that Xander and Graham will be on the mend, even though I made it happen, I hate the fact that they're apart and broken.
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [7 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from (Past Donor)plutofigaro
Review:
Hi,


Ok, that was funny and sad at the same time. Carter's reaction was great. You got to fix this. Please..... I want to see happy Xan and Graham.
Comments from author:
Fixing, fixing now with cement and krazy glue and it will be better than ever.
I promise, we're heading towards the sunshine and roses, thanks for reading :)
Review By [(Past Donor)plutofigaro] • Date [7 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from cryefourme
Review:
Well Hello Non believer. This time Graham is sticking his foot in it. But I can see why he has doubt. First the non proposal now the thought that Xand is cheating. Wow. Heavy stuff. More please. Cuz I need to be able to flash this cheesy grin.
Comments from author:
There will be more, and it won't be too heavy. I am moving towards schmoop, and probably smut and then you can flash all the cheezy grins you got.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [cryefourme] • Date [7 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from kellincried
Review:
AH ANGST!!! ANGST BAD!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Ok first- I am SO sorry!
Second- It's going to be followed up with schmoop. Fluffy fluffy schmoop. I promise!

Thanks for reading! :)
Review By [kellincried] • Date [7 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from dreameralways
Review:
He hit Willow! Not good. Not good at all. I think even Andrew might get mad.
Comments from author:
I thinks so too Andrew would totally be mad about that, not helping that he was aiming for Buffy.

Thanks for the idea of turning Rodney into an animal, I couldn't get the thought out of my head after I read you last review :D
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Caliadragon
Review:
Oh boy, everyone is in trouble now and things couldn't seem to be going worse between Xander and Graham. I can only hope that they quickly realize that they belong together.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
I don't know if it will be quick and I think that it may actually get worse... *cringes* please don't get mad...
Thanks for reading!
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from micheela
Review:
What a lovely bout of chaos! From Dawn to Willow to Xander, I feel so sorry for Carter and Graham - though eventually Graham's miscommunication will be resolved there is no hope for poor Samantha Carter. Fantastic descriptions and the plus was Gile's reaction...perfection. I wonder how Ronon will fair though once Ripper sees he's stunned one of his babies? Poor, poor Ronon. LOL
Comments from author:
Thank-you so much! I'm glad you really like the story. Ronon is not going to know what hit him.
Samantha Carter is just counting the seconds until they leave, can't happen soon enough-well once she gets Rodney out of his bunny form.
Review By [micheela] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from BlackRose
Review:
*Blinks.* Oh dear, when things go bad, they really go bad. *Sinkers.* But Rodney is a bunny, oh that is priceless and Dawn going all chick fight was just as good.
Comments from author:
You know the saying when it rains - it pours, and everyone is really going to get wet. I'm glad you liked the bunny and the chick fight scene!
Review By [BlackRose] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from (Past Donor)plutofigaro
Review:
hi,


Awwww hell. Xander is going to lose it over Willow and Graham needs help fast. Please fix Xan and Graham first because that mess will just turn this into FUBAR.
Comments from author:
FUBAR is right my good friend but I think I need Willow to fix Xander and Graham...

Thanks for reading!
Review By [(Past Donor)plutofigaro] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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