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Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Sea Bird" from Tanydwr
Review:
Interesting start. More please.
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [19 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Sea Bird" from SlowMercury
Review:
Very interesting beginning -- I've never seen a fic where the lady Buffy became had to deal with the consequences of remembering things. And she's still very lady-like, but now she's got some experiences to draw on that pretty much no one will suspect, should she ever crosses the supernatural world again. Which I would guess she will, if she's headed to Port Royal just before the start of the film.

I'm anxious to find out what result, if any, Lady Elizabeth has on the course of the film. Good work.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Sea Bird" from RocksandGlass
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This is a good story, I like the idea of following Elizabeth's character after her return rather than just throwing Buffy into the past, makes it so much more interesting. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Sea Bird" from (Current Donor)liability
Review:
I like it,and I have no idea where you will go with it next! Looking forward to seeing what you write.
Review By [(Current Donor)liability] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Sea Bird" from Prometeus
Review:
I read the story and thought it was a good beginning. Only much later did I notice the author name on it, at which point I thought "well no wonder it's good". Then I checked your stories page and thought GODDAMNIT!! because you're not developing these great story ideas into full stories. Nor are you cutting them off with some kind of ending. So yeah, I am rapidly developing very intense, very ambivalent feelings towards you. :D
Comments from author:
I know I know, I'm a terrible person. I've got what my sister likes to call writer's ADD, I start a story and I go with it for a bit and then I start another. I will say that since joining TtH I've gotten way better, so don't worry, it may take me awhile but there will be updates and eventually conclusions!
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Miss. Summers" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Cool. Also works as answer to Challenge 1602 :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Miss. Summers" from Discord
Review:
Definately interesting and I've never seen this done before. Can't wait for more.
Review By [Discord] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Miss. Summers" from DuskyDushku
Review:
Intriguing....and a new idea :)
Review By [DuskyDushku] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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