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Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from Netchka
Review:
Cool story. Can't wait for Xander to meet up with the boys. More chaps soon please.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [28 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update soon
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from yuiop
Review:
I loved it!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [29 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: When The Boyfriend's Away..." from (Past Donor)RavenWoodbane
Review:
I do really like this story ... Especially the use of italics showing lines From the actual show. Question?? are we ever gonna get another chappie for hunter on the hellmouth?, cause Even though I like this story I'm so in love with H.o.T.H so please please update.... As always hoping for more soon
Review By [(Past Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: When The Boyfriend's Away..." from (Past Donor)RavenWoodbane
Review:
I do really like this story ... Especially the use of italics showing lines From the actual show. Question?? are we ever gonna get another chappie for hunter on the hellmouth?, cause Even though I like this story I'm so in love with H.o.T.H so please please update.... As always hoping for more soon
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you appreciate the citing. Funny story - I'm working on it right now! I alternate a chapter for this and H.O.T.H to be fair. So I should hopefully have it up soon. I'm trying to work on my stories more, work is dying down and my tv shows are starting to wind down for the summer break. And as much as I get done while watching my shows...I get much more when I'm not. ^_^
Review By [(Past Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from MaabConnor
Review:
oh shiny new chapter! this was really good. this was a fight that was always going to come down the line; hunters v. scoobies for world-view was touched in BtVS and this was an excellent take on that.

this story is still awesome.
Review By [MaabConnor] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Nice. First fight is never fun. But good goin Xan! Just blurt out that you hang out with demons on a weekly basis. LMAO nerd.
Comments from author:
Yes well...keeping his mouth shut when he should has never been one of his strong suits. ^_^
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from greeniron
Review:
I'm enjoying the story so far and I'm looking forward to the next chapters. I just have one criticism. You seem to put all of the direct quotes from the show in italics. As a reader, I find that this interrupts the flow of the dialogue and seems counterproductive given how carefully you've reworked Sam and Dean's interactions for the altered storyline. Since fanfiction by its nature is a creative rethinking of canon it doesn't seem necessary to me to point out every bit of altered dialogue. Regardless, you've done an excellent job of reworking the canon for the altered relationships and I'm eager for the next installment -- even with italics included.
Comments from author:
I appreciate your feedback. I understand your criticism about the italics and I've had the same question raised before about the transcript/cannon lines. I used to write them like ~this~ but that was even more distracting.

I need to show the transcript dialogue because I am a firm believer in giving credit where credit is due, and I'm very anti-plagerism. (left over from college, I was a history/anthropology major where we had to document the hell out of our work)

Perhaps I'll just use 'this' and not use italics. Something I'll definitely think about

I hope that you can understand my reasoning and still read the next bit even if I stick with the italics. ^_^
Review By [greeniron] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Yay! Love this story. Thanks for the update.
Comments from author:
Love the review! Thanks!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [18 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from mariposa
Review:
Wow! this is a great story - I am so glad that you've picked it up again. The scenes with Xander and Dean are so sweet, so tender...just so real!
Great job.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad that you are enjoying. I try to make things as real as possible.
Review By [mariposa] • Date [18 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from msdarque
Review:
Very interesting, fun, exciting... I think Sam and Xander make a cute couple. I would love to read more. :D
Congrats!
Comments from author:
Well I shall definitely write more! I promise. I think they are adorable together as well ^_^
Review By [msdarque] • Date [18 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from nightslayer
Review:
great!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [17 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from ursamajor
Review:
Interesting to read how you combine Buffy and Supernatural worlds. When Xander joins the brothers we can finally read how it goes. I think that they have different methods. Perhaps first joint hunting doesn't go as planned...
Comments from author:
Oh there are definitely going to be disputes and differences in hunting styles. Definite tension in the future.
Review By [ursamajor] • Date [17 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from mamarhea
Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I am so very glad you updated.
Thank you!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback!
Review By [mamarhea] • Date [17 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Distance Makes The Heart Grow Lonely" from kyzhart
Review:
Loved the tiff between the boys. Now bring on the makeup sex...lol. Great adaptation of the series. How much does X have in school to finish? Please update soon.
Comments from author:
As much as I love the good times, sometimes its more fun to write the fights. Oh def makeup sex are in the boys' future. Xander's a sophomore, so he's got two years left.
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [17 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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