The sodding Wolfram & Hart??. I suppose those morons are good enough to back up their treats, so it's gonna be quite a fight for the slayers and Buffy. And now, unto the new part =D!. See ya!!.
Comments from author:
From what I hear they're big on having an Apocalypse on thier time schedule. They never really did like the Old One's and the vermin that stem from them including slayers.
So you can imagine how they feel about the Destroyer.
Hey, I may take a short break to finish up Ms. Kitty Fantatico vs. Toto and a short Buffy Star Trek Crossover with klingons.
Dunno. See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
3 days out of the universe?? Talk about a time out. And Buffy is getig closer to her kid, and at the same time, the fraking demons think thay can make their usual mess, they don't know the truth=P. Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Now we all know what happened to Kendra's copy of the Slayer handbook. : )
Next chapter soon
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
And we see Ilirya's last stand(or suicide by Slayer, I'm not too sure how to call it yet ;)) from the spectators P.O.V., and a nice bit about the oncoming war and Slayer dude. Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much.
In a perfect world chapter 16 and chapter 17 should have been one long chapter. I tell ya chapter 16 looked a lot longer when i was writing it.
The Slayer Dude also known as "The Little Dude" [copyright 2010] should learn how to stay fixed in the timeline. Can't have him end up like the Buffy-Protector. : )
Next chapter soon!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Yeah right, when a ROB tells you to do something, it's usually something apocaliptic is gonna happen unless you do what I'm telling ya to do... Yeah right =P. Let's see what this little Buffy vs Ili tussle is really about. Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Ah McSpender, you're so cynical. : ) The Destroyer is on the level.
"There can be only one."
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Coversations with dead people was one of my favorite episodes from the series, and well, this conversations with KAOB's (Know Almost Omnipotent Beings, from the ROB(Random Omnipotent Beings) family) was very funny and philosophic too=). Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
“Are you giving your creator a hard time?”
Words to always think about. : )
Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Surayya is trying to set the order straight, good luck with that. Basara & Motorola... Motorria are finding out about that little thing called security, and the complete lack they have of it... of course, they're gonna flee to the desert... messianic tale, they' tend to blur together after a while =P. Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Hey, when any old vampire can walk in off the street and attack the madonna you know you've got a security problem. and I think it's about time Surayya got a boyfriend. That girl needs some love'n. : )
Next chapter Soon.
PS: Iron Man 2 rocks!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [8 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
“Buffy is baking like cookie dough. Surely some revelation is at hand.” Oh good Grief, the cookie dough metaphor =P. By the way, nice bit of super speed, and the implications about those superpowers; byt the by, the bit about the owl and the roosters is from Millenium, the Chris Carter series??.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Ya got me! I ripped it off from "Millenium".
Hey, all artist steal, great artist steal from the best!
Next chapter soon.
PS: Surayya not so much sped up but stopped time like Illyria.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Ilyria is getting closer to her goal, good, good. And motorola... Erhm, Motorria finds out just how insane are the Bene Gesserit Vamps. They want a Dark Messiah, daamn. Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Don't mess with a pregnant woman. Good advice for the living or the dead. : )
Next chapter soon!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
You say you "reference" your previous 3 stories "a lot", yet this "Book II" is not included in the series list, NOR can I find any indication of a "Slayers of Dune Book I"...so why is this "Book II"?
Please clear up the confusion. ###########################
Edit: 201004161100UCT response to author's feedback. Thanks! Much clearer now. I'll see if there's a formal procedural method within tthfanfic, but what you've done takes care of the problem.
Comments from author:
Book I is: 1. "A form of Eternty" 2. "The Way of Light" 3. "The Last Sandworm"
The "The Dreams of the Lost" start after "The Last Sandworm"
I haven't figured out a way to create a two layer hierarchy with the series title at the top and each book as a seperate subset.
