In the middle of the fic and I would love to continue, however the grammar and lack of continuity regarding the tenses are driving me CRAZY. I am literally unable to concentrate on the story line! Love the idea, plot, et.c, but PLEASE fix the grammar!!

This story continues to be both fresh and funny. The Buffy/Michael team-up is wonderful; I love how everyone keeps being surprised that Michael got off his ass and is actively helping. That must hurt a bit, actually; all these people and other supernaturals thought he'd stand by and do nothing.

Having all these angels help out is really making a positive difference in the apocalypse. I hope it keeps up!

One thing I hope is a typo in the last chapter: you wrote "a Unitarian furnished waiting room" but I *really* hope you meant "utilitarian." Unitarian is a religion.

Thanks for the update!

Whoops, I'll change that. Thanks.

Ok, first off, just so you know, I HATE Supernatural, so it's a pleasant surprise to find that I liked this fic. Well, thanks for writing this, keep up the good work, bye for now.

Thank you.

I'm hoping this will be continued. It gives a much more positive view to Michael, and throws in the idea of Buffy being changed from her time, but in a manner that seems positive.

Thanks for writing what you have.

That was freakin' awesome!!!
Pleasse, please, please, please update soon??
I'm kinda beggin' ya here.

Very interesting premise and story so far!

great blending of the two TV series. question though wouldn't willow feel all the power that the demons and angels are throwing around? not to mention the light show Lucifer put on when he escape his prison.

I hadn't really thought about her, but I guess it would be along the lines that angels and demons powers are different wavelengths than hers, so if she isn't specifically looking for that wavelength then they would escape her notice.

awwww...that is so cool. More soon!!! YAY!

awesome chapter! Can't wait to see the next one!!!!!

Great story.

I love the interactions between the Angels--especially the way Michael deals with his family/underlings, allowing them leeway, but retaining ultimate authority (especially the glare he sends Gabriel when the latter propositions him). I also love the way Buffy humanizes him, translating slang and giving him little prompts (like maybe you should take Sam's hand instead of just grabbing him).

I'm currently working my way through season five, so I've only just met Micheal (tSStS), but I hope in cannon he turns out to be similar to the way you've made him.

I'm glad you like it. I think Michael had potential if only he wasn't so stuck in the "Daddy's Perfect Soldier" mindset in canon.

Wow. A different concept, but otherwise worth it. Very nicely done with the story line, but grammar could be better. Towards the end there with the last few chapters it started to get really frustrating. I'm really enjoying Buffy-Michael. And with every SPN fic I read, I feel sorrier and sorrier for Sam.

This story is awesome. I was eagerly looking for something to read along these lines and can not wait for the next chapter.

This is a fantastic story! I do hope that you will update soon! I want to know if Lucy will ever catch on to the plan. Great story!

this....this is freaking awesome!!! I love it..no..I love you!!!! So interesting...so amazing...so freaking..it makes....im speechless at how awesome it is. I want more. This story makes me thirsty for more! Please keep this going!

Loved the addition of Tessa and Death - Death is one of the best guest characters on spn. Only one critique: Dean doesn't remember his first time meeting Tessa. She told him the second time about it but he didn't remember.

If I remember the episode correctly, the second time they met Tessa gave him back the memories of what had happened the first time around, she didn't just tell him. At least that's what I remember.