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Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Dragonelf
Nice story!

By the way, you might want to change all the occurrences of Sandarin into Sindarin and in chapter three you might want to replace "vial and disgusting" with "vile and disgusting".

You might want to double check chapter four as it looks very similar to chapter three. Could you have accidentally have uploaded chapter three twice?

::Starts reading the next story in the series::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Comments from author:
Thanks for being my beta reader. I uploaded chapter 4.

Thanks for the review Dragonelf.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of story "Lessons, Revelations and Surprises" from Tamda
Nice story, and this is a nice addition to your overall arc.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I haven't finished it yet and I will get around to it after I'm finished with Long Lost Brothers.
Review By [Tamda] • Date [26 Jul 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
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