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Review of chapter "Mommy?" from HebiR
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Would like to see more. It is interesting that, if this happens, WIllow, Xander, and faith would be in the same world, but Xander would be in a different village and would show up there about two years after the other two got to Konoha if they so chose, since Gaara is younger than Naruto and Sasuke. Of course, the ninja would have integration issues, as the shinobi villages probably do not let anyone into their Academies unless they were raised in town or are clearly "under control." And Sam and Dean need a mutual emotional connection to John for certain things to work, and for Bobby.
So realistically, Our Scoobies should probably have to raise their kids in the original worlds; Buffy being the only one who can get away with keeping Harry. Even in that case, random wizards had Harry Potter sightings over the years, according to the first bok, and a lack of these combined with Dumbledore's panic would have consequences. And if Buffy chose not to go with Harry, he'd have nowhere at all to live.
Review By [HebiR] • Date [1 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from Rune
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Really creative.

But I repeat my call for someone to kick the PTB in the balls. Repeatedly!
Review By [Rune] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from firedrakegirl
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Sequel please!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [24 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from Stationary
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omg, this is awesome! i don't know if you'd consider continuing into a sequel but i think it'd be pretty great if you could maybe do at least some drabbles or one-shot chapters about thier new childhoods? and maybe find a way that lets them have access to each other or mve across the dimensions...?
Review By [Stationary] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from Damia
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It seems interesting. I'd like to see more.
- D
Review By [Damia] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from FireWolfe
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Joss was clearly smoking something with season 8 of the comics. They started out ok but a gay buffy , giant dawn and twilight/angel and a giles/ faith hook up can we say ewww on so many levels. Not to mention an evil willow. Seriously if that is what he had planned for season 8 I can see why it was cancled. I have to say it was massively disappointing. The idea of different destinies is interesting though I am not and anime fan at all. The rest I could see. interesting fic by the way.
Comments from author:
Seriously! I was reading the first compenium/omnibus/what-have-you going, "Ok, ok, ok... wait - WHAT?!" The time-skippage and just what the hell, man? Where were they going with this and what on earth were they thinking? I'll allow a little leeway for the changed medium but jeepers, they were compromising canon character portrayals right and left! I've heard from some "Angel" fans that Cordelia's character-demise was heart-wrenching to watch in the last few seasons, but seeing what the team was doing to some of the others just... ugh.

Faith/Giles?! What the hell?! I didn't even get that far. Thank god. I'm all for a good alternate pairing in AUs, but canon Giles and canon Faith making the beast with two backs? Nuh-uh, I don't believe it... and now it IS canon! *wanders off muttering obscenities*
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [3 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from Allyssiandra
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S0... will there be a sequel? Drabbles to show their lives together? Maybe stories to show how the scoobies break the rules and stay in touch when their kids destinies kick in? What happens when the kids run into the situations they did as champions and their reactions then? Please, please, please, pretty please... this idea just screams more. Love the story btw.
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from LeaFairy
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Well, this was one weird and twisted idea... I loved it! *grins* Love Buffy having Harry and really all of the kids with their 'parents', but I think may favorite was 15year old Dawn getting two kids, Dean and Sam Winchester at that. Just brilliant.

I definitely hope you decide to write more to this verse cause I would love to read more. Anyhoo, thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from betrayal
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Oh the ending was amazing! I hope that you plan on continueing this story. Or atleast one shots for each, anyway keep up the great job!
Review By [betrayal] • Date [15 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from EllandrahSylver
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I think that if you're saddling the Scoobs with a bunch of micro-Champions, then I'd like to see you write about what the actual experience is like for them. This is a good prologue, but there's no way you can call it a finished story.

That said, I like it so far. Although I probably would have dumped Dean and Sam on Xander. Although giving the youngest Scooby two munchkins, while all her elders got only one apiece is definitely comical.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from Wise
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I propose an alternate solution: the scoobies tell Whistler to go to hell, and figure something out when the time comes.
Review By [Wise] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from CrystalBlaze
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..Twisted.

After that crack on Twilight, I'm just glad they didn't stick Giles with Baby Anita...
Comments from author:
... I considered it. But I wasn't feeling that sadistic. I LIKE Giles!
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from Requiem
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Love it, hope to see more.
Review By [Requiem] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from CJNyfalt
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A good start. However, I feel that Whistler should have said something about Xanders and Willows children. It's better to figure it out from the story, than having you just list them at the end.
Review By [CJNyfalt] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mommy?" from Mamodo
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Oh, I would simply love to see Faith in Konoha.
She would rock the village! XD
And at least she would have Xan and Wills with her in the dimension.
The three of them are much more lucky then the others.
I don't think that Twilight will happen. The Scoops could never abandon someone who really needs their help.
For the same reason I think that they will go with the kids when their time comes.
I mean ... they will look for a loophole in the whole separated aspect of the deal, but they will go.
Think an uberwicca and a key could establish an interdemensional telephone service???
Review By [Mamodo] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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