I am really enjoying this story. Its well written and the character development of the slytherins is fantastic. Don't get me wrong but it seems as if the story is more about Pansy than about Hermione. I love how you added Willow and her crush on Snape....More please and soon.
Review By [GeekGoddess] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Whoa, what the hell happened with Pansy? She kinda over-reacted with the violence. Oh well. I loved the chapter! It was great and I loved the further look into Pansy's character. I loved her teasing Draco-the drama queen in the beginning. *giggles* I also really liked the scene between her and Winky the house-elf. It definitely showed her more softer/caring side.
All around wonderful update! I can't wait to read more!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [31 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Good chapter. It's always fun to see Pansy's somewhat nice side and her teasing side, but what happened at the end? Did she go totally mad? Seamus was being very rude, and verging on sexual harassment. Ron was insulting and trying to force her to come with him instead of asking. She didn't 'maim' her classmates! She barely hurt them! A broken nose can be fixed with a single episkey, and an Impedimenta should simply throw someone away. They probably wouldn't even need to spend the night at the hospital wing. Why is she so overreacting?
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Yay! I'm so happy you updated this fic! I totally loved the chapter!
Faith was great with her unusual happy mood. It's actually kinda suspicious :) I also enjoyed her teasing Willow. *giggles* The Willow/Severus is still awesome. *sighs* I LOVE them together. I also liked Faith's interacting with Blaise and Theo and later on Pansy and Rona as well. I'm a Slytherin lover at heart, so I always love when you write them... Which now that I think about it, it's kinda weird, my favorite HP character is and will always be Hermione, but I LOVE Slytherin characters too (Severus, Draco, Blaise, Lucius, some DE, and Voldemort himself are my favorites) and I hate or at least strongly dislike Harry, Ron and Ginny. (Ron more than anyone else though). Strange. *shakes head*
Anyhoo, thanks for the new chapter! I still adore this story and I definitely look forward to seeing where you go with it!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Not Rated
It figured, that out of all of them, her mirror would be kind of a pervert.---- hahahaha
where Faith and Willow were comfortably ensconced, “I live to serve you, my queen.”----------one, nice usage of ‘esconced’ ;) 2. jaja at Draco!
jaunt’--- that is a word that needs to be used more often!
Pilfered—one of my fav words. Heehee, you always use fun words!
“Purple teddy bear?”-- :)
Hogwarts had a flourishing gambling ring and almost a quarter of the practice voyeurs were there to see who they should bet on to win the House Cup.---- hmmm…JKR never mentioned this…lol ;)
I believe that Mister Jordan will be coming with the Weasley twins, he might be more amenable to the suggestion,” Theo said lightly.----------hahahahaha
Good chapter…nice to see Faith happy though I’m not sure why…happy to know that Willow/Snape is moving along well…Do feel like the chapter was a filler chapter – though I guess I’m just not quite sure where this story is going. It is one of my favorites but it hasn’t been moving fast enough for me to figure out the main purpose. I assume ultimately they’ll kill Voldy? Or will it be good enough just to unite the houses? Or is this mostly a sociological look at what happens when you screw with the Hogwarts houses and throw slayers in there?
Ha! I can just see Oliver being militant about the house (Quidditch) rivalry with Slytherin even after leaving Hogwarts. And the leering in the face of unwarranted disapproval was so very Faith. Looking forward to more.
I am so, so , so, soooooo ridiculously happy that you have update! I love the way you write Faith and the fact that it sounds like you're pairing her with Oliver! Please more? soon? :D
Review By [improvedpeanut] • Date [25 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Like running a matchmaking business." from LeaFairy
Review:
*giggles* Lee and Fred are absolutely hilarious! I wonder how long it will take for Lee to wear Rona down? Probably a long, long, long while :-)
The Severus/Willow bit, had to have been my favorite part though. Aww. I simply adore the pairing. They're so cute together and I always thought that Severus' deserves a happy ending with a woman who actually cares... and Willow could definitely be that woman.
Anyhoo, thanks for the great chapter!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Not Rated