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Review of chapter "Arrivals" from bradsan
Review:
Alright I'm pathetic. I read it once again and you know what. The Watcher Council dismissed Buffy because there is another Slayer on the Hellmouth. They don't realize that even when Buffy don't need to fulfill her duties they still need to protect her and when necessary they still need to answer to her if she want to know things and ask for it.
If they don't people like some NID figures or people like Walsh thinks she is something they can freely experiment with and knowing the Council they can't have that. They don't care about Buffy but they do care about their 'weapons' and even if they don't want too. Buffy is still a Slayer a weapon.

So in my opinion Buffy is in a win win situation. Free of duty, if she fights it's her choice, can have a life and be The Slayer all at once and still protected. What more can a girl ask for. 'lol'
Comments from author:
Thank you! :)
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrivals" from spk
Review:
I just love this story. ;)
Comments from author:
Thank you! :)
Review By [spk] • Date [5 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrivals" from bradsan
Review:
Read it again all at once. Doesn't the Council think it's strange that Buffy kept her abilities after dying. It's good thing they don't know that after the CPR that she became stronger only Angel knows that and only because he asked how she felt and she told him that she felt good and stronger.

Nobody realized, neither does Buffy, that she became The Slayer but never the same slayer as Kendra or Faith. She became literally The Slayer with a stronger line to Sineya and the other chosen ones became the slayer and the potentials because activated and never chosen became slayers. After her second dead and being pulled from heaven and still being the slayer should have give them a clue. Odd if you think about it especially when the line didn't go through Buffy anymore. Once in a lifetime probably. Giles knew in season eight.

Hope you will update soon.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrivals" from AndreaMaine
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Hmmm... does this version mean that Jenny Calendar now becomes the Computer Science Teacher at the same high school in Colorado Springs that Buffy and Cassy attend? Does this mean that Drusilla and Spike will come to the Springs instead of lovely Sunnyhell? I just wonder if and when Angel/ Angelus get that moment of happiness with Buffy will he become a threat to the SGC? Will Vampires and Demons seem to be seen as a Foothold situation? The questions could go on, but I think I've asked enough. Love the story so far by the way.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [11 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exam" from DieselDriver
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I'm wondering why she needed Jack's credit card. Having a house sold or ready to sell, a store worth of stuff, well, not sold yet so that doesn't count but also all of Gile's stuff would include a lot of money since he was a watcher and presumably had a lot of extra expenses he'd have to cover. Maybe it wasn't transferred yet? Also it seems a bit quick for her to accept him as her instant father like it is portrayed. After all, she doesn't know him from Adam.

Interesting take on the change though. Good story so far.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from belgintei
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Although I like this story I feel I need to point out that at sixteen Buffy cannot sign a non-disclosure form anymore than she could something like a loan agreement.
Review By [belgintei] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrivals" from Genuka
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Nice save!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrivals" from bradsan
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Yess you updated and a good one to. Cruel how you let Wesley reveal the secret and has to explain things "LOL" He has something to explain in London and they won't be happy.

I don't understand one thing though. I always thought the NID is "evil" or stupid. How come they are in there. won't it be dangerous when they know about the Slayer.

Still hoping for an none evil Angel or maybe Angelus could love her as much as Angel does. Only he will have problems showing it. There won't be a Willow who could put back his soul in time. I would like if they both have to fight Goa'uld.
Comments from author:
Richard Woolsey is the one in the NID who does what he thinks is right instead of siding with the organization that employs him, and even shows this when he helps the SGC against Kinsey when he finds out he's in the trust. They may not find out. ;)
Review By [bradsan] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrivals" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Glad you came back to this!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from AndreaMaine
Review:
Just finished reading the whole story you have posted so far. I loved it, but I think you should as you find the muse do more with it.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm kind of stuck on this story though; it's the one I'm stuck on most I believe. However, I should be able to update all of my stories soon!
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [29 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from bradsan
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Oh read it from the beginning again. Still love and hoping for some more soon. Can't wait when Angel will arrive and I noticed that Buffy doesn't train. She has to train because she has to stay in shape but also to burn down the extra energy. She doesn't patrol so she has to do something.

You also forgot that Buffy knows more languages like ancient Latin and Greek and possibly normal Greek and Latin also. Those two languages aren't common as well.

Sam will be so confused when she will see her first vampire and Janet want to take samples of his blood to investigate and will be looking for a heartbeat. Oh and Teal'c wants to spar with both Buffy and Angel. This is so gone be fun. I really looking forward to it. Angel will still come won't he. I only hope there will be no happy clause in his curse because I hate that part.

Well hope hearing from you soon.

edit: only a year. forgot that part.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I don't recall anything about Buffy knowing Greek, unless it is in the comics (which I haven't read any), but she had only been with Giles about a year, long enough for one language. Her knowing Latin wouldn't entirely surprise Daniel because it is still taught in schools. Angel will still come, and it will be soon. :)
Review By [bradsan] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from Lotusja
Review:
Good job... I like where you are taking this.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! :)
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from Gideon
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That was a pretty smooth day in itself :) I wonder who will be interested to see her name come up in a request for security clearance? Hopefully the NID don't see it!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Day" from VillageOrchid
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Well, at least the after school questions were easy questions. I liked little details like how you had Buffy make a few friends in her new classes, and in re-reading the last few chapters I also realized that having Buffy run away from more medical tests was also in character with her running away from home/rejection in the series.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
great update will the rest of sg1 learn of buffy's abilities?
Comments from author:
Thank you! They will learn eventually, just not sure when.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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