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Review of chapter "First Day" from bradsan
Review:
Oh read it from the beginning again. Still love and hoping for some more soon. Can't wait when Angel will arrive and I noticed that Buffy doesn't train. She has to train because she has to stay in shape but also to burn down the extra energy. She doesn't patrol so she has to do something.

You also forgot that Buffy knows more languages like ancient Latin and Greek and possibly normal Greek and Latin also. Those two languages aren't common as well.

Sam will be so confused when she will see her first vampire and Janet want to take samples of his blood to investigate and will be looking for a heartbeat. Oh and Teal'c wants to spar with both Buffy and Angel. This is so gone be fun. I really looking forward to it. Angel will still come won't he. I only hope there will be no happy clause in his curse because I hate that part.

Well hope hearing from you soon.

edit: only a year. forgot that part.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I don't recall anything about Buffy knowing Greek, unless it is in the comics (which I haven't read any), but she had only been with Giles about a year, long enough for one language. Her knowing Latin wouldn't entirely surprise Daniel because it is still taught in schools. Angel will still come, and it will be soon. :)
Review By [bradsan] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from Lotusja
Review:
Good job... I like where you are taking this.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! :)
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from Gideon
Review:
That was a pretty smooth day in itself :) I wonder who will be interested to see her name come up in a request for security clearance? Hopefully the NID don't see it!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Day" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, at least the after school questions were easy questions. I liked little details like how you had Buffy make a few friends in her new classes, and in re-reading the last few chapters I also realized that having Buffy run away from more medical tests was also in character with her running away from home/rejection in the series.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
great update will the rest of sg1 learn of buffy's abilities?
Comments from author:
Thank you! They will learn eventually, just not sure when.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from bradsan
Review:
Love it can't wait what will be next.

Will she tell General Hammond that she is the Slayer. When the Council comes she needs every support she can get. And To be fair I want to read about Buffy sparring with Teal'c and to read about Sam's face when she sees what Buffy can do. She also needs protection from the NID if they ever find out what she can do. They will do everything to get their hand on her and if general Hammond knows he will inform the president and together they can prevent that the NID will take Buffy to experience on.

Again can't wait what will be next.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you love it! :) General Hammond and the rest of SG-1 will find out, eventually.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day" from serenityselena
Review:
it seems that school will be a pleasant thing for Buffy and that she will soon know more about Jack's job under the mountain...
hope to read more soon ^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I'll try to update soon! :)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Suspicions" from serenityselena
Review:
Buffy sure managed to surprise them ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Suspicions" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome story so far, I loved it. I can't wait to read more.

Dani
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Suspicions" from bradsan
Review:
So glad you updated. Can't wait for more. Love the way how Jack is around Buffy.

nothing more to say, you already know I like the story.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [23 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Suspicions" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Glad to see more of this story. A little anti-climactic in terms of what was dramatized in the chapter, but some funny a and good dialog.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you like it!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Suspicions" from texaswookie
Review:
nice chapter maybe Jack can teach her about doing the secret Identity thing. As a former black ops guy he should know those things and his work with Maybourne showed he could play the game when he had to.
Comments from author:
That's a good idea to add into the story! Thank you!
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cookout Secrets" from nightshadowlife
Review:
lmao love the cliffy!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [27 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cookout Secrets" from bradsan
Review:
I really loved this line: What? Do I have something in my hair?” She gasped and ran to the nearest mirror before she sighed in relief. “Thank goodness it isn’t my hair!” "LOL"

Oh and about Sam. It's Jack descision who he wants to tell and not hers. If somebody else knew before her, so what. I agree with Buffy if thats more important than Jack having a daughter he didn't know off it gives you an impression whats important to Sam. her knowing at the same time as some other people or the fact that Jack has a daughter. Again not her descision to make, its Jacks and Buffy's.

What did Jack think giving Buffy an checkover. You would think that he would understand with Buffy's ablities that something strange could show up in her blood. When the NID finds out she will become a labrat. Janet will keep an report and they will find out. Very Stupid Jack and very Stupid Buffy for not warning her dad about this. Jack is the adult he has to think about such things and think twice before doing something that could be a danger to his daughter. Argh man and teenagers always doing things without giving it an second thought.

I really love it when Buffy is jacks daughter even more then when they have a romantic reationship and I love those stories a lot.

Thanks for this update, hoping for more soon to come up.
Comments from author:
The tiny abnormality is in Jack's blood too. It is a result of being his daughter, not the Slayer. All will be explained more later. I will try to update again soon.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cookout Secrets" from Eureka
Review:
So I take it the others didn't expect her to say that?
Comments from author:
No. No one has told her about the SGC and what they do yet.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [20 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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