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Review of chapter "Chapter One: Running" from (Past Donor)phoenixqueen
Review:
I think the idea behind this story is sound, but as a long time fan of Narnia, there is one glaring error I feel obligated to point out. It is impossible for someone to enter Narnia from our world and end up back in Narnia's past. Time continues to move forward there, just like it does here. The only difference is that you never know how long it's been in Narnia between visits. It could be a day, or an hour, or fifty years, but time must keep moving forward. If the events of LWW and the Golden Age occurred as they did in the books/movies, the Witch is dead, and there shouldn't be a spell of winter on Narnia (which seems to be what you're implying with that last sentence from Ed about depending where in Narnia's history they are). Other than that, you've got a fairly good start.
Comments from author:
I realize that going backward in time shouldn't be possible but it is in this story because Dawn isn't any random sorceress or champion of Narnia she's the Key no door is closed to her power not even this one. That's why I chose her in particular. No other person would be capable of changing the past because of Aslan's tight leash on dimensional magics but Dawn is kind of defying Aslan anyway. Does that make sense? It will be more fully explained in later chapters. Anyway thank you for reading and taking the time to review!
Review By [(Past Donor)phoenixqueen] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Edmund Pevensie" from BerserkerNW
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Nice story! So, I completely skip the author's notes for most chapters, so I take it I missed a notice mentioning that 'The Last Battle' never happened? So sad that Ed's still so old. Are they in Jadis-ruled Narnia, or just winter post-Golden Age? Thanks for sharing this!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Edmund Pevensie" from aussiemel
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Interesting start. Would love to see more soon. Keep up the great work.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Running" from lexas
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Loved the beginning can't wait to see if Edmund will get younger and who will Dawn and Edmund run into in the forest? can't wait for next update.
Review By [lexas] • Date [4 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Edmund Pevensie" from LeaFairy
Review:
Intriguing beginning chapters... I look forward to reading more!!

Any chance of "A Price to Pay" being updated anytime soon? I really miss that story.
Comments from author:
Yeah LeaFairy, I'm doing a major updating spree (thank my friend Sophie, she's a doll and is letting me hog her computer while mine's being fixed!) I've got about a half-chapter of A Price to Pay written so stay tuned! Thanks for Reviewing!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Edmund Pevensie" from CPTSkip
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Excellent work. I'm sorry for the way High King Peter and the Queens of Narnia died in your world. But then I always hated the way Susan fared in the Chronicles of Narnia also. I am looking forward to seeing if Edmund gets his youth back and Dawn and he get together. Edmund and Lucy were always my favorite characters so it is nice to see one King is still around. And will Dawn be able to get Buffy into Narnia and will Aslan help Buffy? So much good stuff to look forward to. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Edmund Pevensie" from Pardryll
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This is an excellent story, so far. Well written, and the characters are believable. It's going at a great pace, and I, for one, look forward to more! *clicks the little Tracking button, and the Recommend button too*
Review By [Pardryll] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Edmund Pevensie" from DesitaniaF
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ya know, Narnia has things that make you younger.... :) wouldnt do for poor ed to have a heart attack after all, and dawn with no way of gettin him to a modern hospital
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Edmund Pevensie" from mousemt
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Fun beginning. Hope to see more soon.
Review By [mousemt] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Edmund Pevensie" from AllenPitt
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interesting... will Buffy figure in the story at all, or is this "only" about Dawn? Just wondering. Hm, I wonder if Spike might show up at some point, he has no interest in fighting Glory per se, he was always all about Buffy.
Dawn 'disappearing' might be enough to motivate Buffy /get her to snap out of it? Meanwhile, what era of Narnia they're in should be interesting...
Comments from author:
Don't worry Buffy will be in the story, she can't stay in catatonia forever after all, and do you really think Dawn would leave her behind? Thanks for Reviewing!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Running" from AllenPitt
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maybe Dawn's Key-ness will come into play in Narnia somehow? Dawn at present doesn't realize Buffy is consumed by guilt (for just a second, contemplated giving up on protecting her from Glory) and hey, maybe Glory can follow them into Narnia. She is a god, after all...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Running" from DesitaniaF
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you think if Hank breaks Karen Pevensie's heart he'll be found mauled to death by a lion? :)

Poor Ed, but you're breaking Narnia canon, not that I really mind. I'd just as rather not have had The Last Battle happen, since it means no more trips to Narnia...
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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