Just finished re-reading this, and almost died laughing - I'd forgotten how awesome this story is! Are there any plans to continue it? Not only is it developing a very good storyline, but you still haven't told us what Xander's building in the basement! I'm dying of curiosity, especially after you credited me with making you think about just what it was he's building!
Review By [ianquest] • Date [11 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cue Showdown Music; oh hell, who let the snake ou-" from BobSquirrelKing
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"The left hand may be sinister, but his right hand was quite… dexterous."
Latin puns, really? Snape's lucky they were only in his head and Xander couldn't hear them or he would have been mocked horrifically.
And for the story as a whole? This is one of the most hilariously awesome stories I have read in a long time, and the little observations Luna and Xander are making that show just how powerful the ability to know what makes a person tick can really be.
Review By [BobSquirrelKing] • Date [7 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And segues into something slightly more ridiculous" from Ceiryn
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Just read the prophecy. Nearly choked. Good stuff.
Review By [Ceiryn] • Date [28 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It Begins with a rather Absurd Situation" from Aerhiana
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are you ever going to update? I love this story!
Review By [Aerhiana] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Do I wanna know what she miscalculated? Is Xander gonna be okay? will they save Wayne's team? What's coming next?
Review By [starfire] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "More plot- and plotting!" from starfire
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Ohh my.. You have become a new favorite author..This story is FANTASTIC. XD.. And i love how you explain their improvements and all the side information that makes it FIT.. man I wish I could write like you.
Review By [starfire] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Afterward, things go from practical to dangerous." from starfire
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Ohh Gods above and below i LOVED this chapter it was awesome.. and when the hufflepuff head got all GRRR i BOUNCED in my chair.
Review By [starfire] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Okay it was going really, really well until you crossed it with Girl Genus. That might possibly have been just a tiny little bit too much.
On the other hand this is a great fic and I really like what you have done with the Puffs in the AU! Xander is doing great, and I am far from sure that you don't have something in mind for Neville and Ginny beyond friendship, which would be cool.
Great story, please continue it if you can!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Hilarious! Just read the whole thing again from the beginning, and was surprised to discover that it looks like you've been doing some edits. It's really good - I laughed hysterically through large chunks of it! :) Plus, having discovered Girl Genius a few months ago, I now actually get all the stuff about Sparks and Jaegers!
Hopefully, you'll be returning to this story in the not-too-distant future?
Review By [ianquest] • Date [20 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Stress points, part 3" from Downery
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Good try. Enjoyed the story greatly till this chapter. Went from humorous crack fic to wtf? If the whole spark thing with Hermione didn't happen it would've still been good but that just kind of destroyed the story for me.
Don't hate the story but killed my interest now. Weird how it only takes one twist of the plot to make something unreadable for a person.
Comments from author:
Huh. Interesting. Does it help if I say it's not a pivotal point? Well, Hermione isn't; the main three (H/R/Hr) are *supposed* to be incidental. It's just fun to write her!
Review By [Downery] • Date [22 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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