Review of chapter "Thoughts and Feelings" from
CinnamonGrrlReview:
The premise for this is not bad, but everyone is so very OOC, it's like reading a story set in familiar universes(s) but populated with all original characters. I'm sorry.
Review By [
CinnamonGrrl] • Date [14 Jul 12] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thoughts and Feelings" from
CelebwenTelcontarReview:
Please, please continue! I can't wait to see what's next!
HS
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CelebwenTelcontar] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Comfort" from
CelebwenTelcontarReview:
Ugh... Kurotsuchi reminds me of the main character in Stephen King's "It".
HS
Review By [
CelebwenTelcontar] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Thoughts and Feelings" from
joshlamontReview:
...did I miss a story somewhere, or is this just dropping us in the middle of a setting?
Comments from author:
No, this is the first one. If I ever get the idea for it I might write a prequel explaining how Dawn and Byakuya met.
Review By [
joshlamont] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
