Review of chapter "Even After the Darkest Night..." from SwimmieTeam
Review:
Oh, god. That was awesome. Better than any poetry I can write. It's really good.
Comments from author:
Sorry my review notifications don't work anymore so I just saw this. Thank you for reviewing! :)
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [13 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Even After the Darkest Night..." from FireWolfe
Review:
Very well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you, Fire :)
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [28 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Even After the Darkest Night..." from Greywizard
Review:
Very disturbing.
Something that makes me want to reach out and choke the throat of whoever would do something like that.
It's the sign of a good writer that can evoke things like that.
Good work.
Comments from author:
It is. I'm usually not quite so disturbing but this particular story flowed together in all of 20 minutes, so I am especially proud of that. I'm glad I could envoke that type of reaction within you, even as I fervently wish that such activities never happened in the world.
Thank you for your very kind feedback- It is appreciated.
Luna
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [22 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Even After the Darkest Night..." from JaCee
Review:
Luna,
I loved it. Having seen too much of the first part, I'm glad you wrote the ending as you did. Thanks for sharing. JaCee
Comments from author:
JaCee,
Thanks for reviewing. Seems we're kindreds in that area. I definitely felt that a happy ending was extremely necessary- and I hope everyone can find their own happy ending eventually :)
Review of chapter "Even After the Darkest Night..." from Karis
Review:
the knowledge that you needed to write this at an un-godly hour both worries and saddens me. Pain like this needs purging, but at the same time such pain should not be felt. I hope the cast out pain never returns to you. for as much as i loved reading such powerful poetry, i do not wish it to come at such an expense. Be well, and give hugs often
Comments from author:
Hi Karis~ Thank you for reading and reviewing. Prose is an excellent outlet for me~ but please don't worry~I'm okay. Thank you for the support, Luna
Review By [Karis] • Date [22 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Even After the Darkest Night..." from POTENTIALlyAwesome
Review:
Wow. I'm kinda speechless. Very much so basic poetry, but a very compelling story- very sad.
Comments from author:
*smiles* Wow, thank you for the high praise & rec. I wasn't really expecting that reaction, but I'm glad you liked it :)
Gracias, Luna
Review By [POTENTIALlyAwesome] • Date [22 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
