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Review of chapter "Darla" from oldgirllost
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Just read thios all the way through again. Extremely good and I want more but I see it has bee a long time since it was added to. Is it abandoned?
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darla" from morena
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Wow, just wow. This story is such a trip. I love Connor the Destroyer of Wraith! The whole lore that the villiage he's been sort of protecting has created around him is fun. And not exactly entirely inaccurate...I mean, it was a god's intervention that allowed him to be born in the first place. Darla is an interesting twist and I'm curious to see how you've interpreted her. In the show I'd always kinda assumed she was the First Evil not wanting Jasmine to be reborn because that would've given her competition, so I'm very interested to find out what your take is. Am looking forward to Sheppard's reaction when he eventually finds out Connor's his missing nephew (I mean it would make sense for his brother to send him a photo of this kid he's supposed to be looking for, right?).

Anyway, great story! Am looking forward to more!
Review By [morena] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darla" from Netchka
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Wonderfull story. More please! Thank you.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darla" from mokona
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this is awesome and you should totally finish it!
Review By [mokona] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darla" from FlashFreeze
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Brilliant :D
Review By [FlashFreeze] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darla" from spacey
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*snorts and shakes her head* i adore that little exchange, the whole "whore" "i was the best but i prefer mom" thing
Review By [spacey] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darla" from Gideon
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Nice to see Darla doing something useful here to add to the one unselfish act in her life. if she is manipulating the computers does that mean what Beckett has found is not true? Or did she just manipulate the computer into doing a test it would not normally do.
John doesn't seem to recognise Connor's name so has he even heard that Connor is missing yet?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [25 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darla" from TouchoftheWind
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Hey, awesome update! I do think Darla is a good character to use since she is moving the story along nicely. I can't help but wonder what it is that Carson found out about Connor- his relation to John or that Connor's 'human'...I think him being human would be a good one because it would leave the relation bombshell to later and give you chance to build on the interactions and their theories on how a human ended up in the Pegasus Galaxy. Also when they find out he's human and think about his scars they may think he was abused- especially since Connor would show signs of such a thing (Holtz wouldn't have been a saint by any means) like avoiding touch and such.

I do hope we see more Darla in this story since she can lead the team to the revelations and such. She could also warn Connor about any Wraith attacks before even Teyla senses them. Also the medical stuff we came up with- flashback! That way it won't go to waste! Lol! I'm on Narcissus in Chains now- I'm only on chp 3 so far though.

Update soon!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [25 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darla" from Waverly
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So happy to see this updated again, I love your depiction of Darla!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [24 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darla" from Eiva
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I was almost in despair that this story will never get updated!

Thanks! Great chapter!
Review By [Eiva] • Date [24 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Friendly Fire" from TouchoftheWind
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65th REVIEW! AHA!

-dances around with confetti-

Soon you'll have 100!

now I command thee to update!
Comments from author:
lol. Here it is!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Friendly Fire" from FlashFreeze
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Ew. Just.... Ew.

Although, at least people are smart enough to actually destroy the body of the thing that was hard to kill, otherwise it's just gonna come after you again.
Review By [FlashFreeze] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Friendly Fire" from shinysolace
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oh wow. just found the story thanks to the banner and read from start to here, and what a place for a cliffhanger...
the slight tweaks to the sga universe are nice, and although john still has family issues, his brother doesn't yet seem to be the a-hole he was portrayed as at their dads funeral. connor 'embracing' the destroyer, and lorne being the so-far primary contact, makes this a much appreciated and awaited story- update soon please!
Review By [shinysolace] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Friendly Fire" from Arekanderu
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Awesome! Poor Teyla
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Friendly Fire" from DemonChildeKyra
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Okay, um....ew! I didn't even get splattered and I'm feeling the need for a shower! If I were Teyla, I'd be in there for a week! And poor Connor! I volunteer to play "Nurse"!!!! *grins and leers at Connor* More soon, please?

~ Kyra
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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