Review of chapter "Background Information" from lothlorien
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interesting. it should be fun when Connor meets the team... please continue soon
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [3 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Background Information" from MaxGSandeman
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Nate and his friends have not asked how or when, about Conner's birth. They have a birth date. They do not know, that it is fake.
Willow's discovery about Nate's operation, certainly fills in a bit about Leverage.
A note about ch2 - "and Illyria strolled inside with a cowed looking nurse following her." I cannot imagine Illyria strolling into any room. She moves with purpose, so I could imagine the cowed nurse hurrying after her, so as to not receive more of Illyria's displeasure.
Review By [MaxGSandeman] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Background Information" from aveave
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This is a great chapter. I hope you will write next one soon, because I would love to know what will happen.
Review By [aveave] • Date [26 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Background Information" from kayron
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It's good that both Connor and Nate have people willing to look out for them. They are not as alone as they think they are. Ilyria has already lost the AI team. I don't know how much she actually cared for them, but it makes her detemined that she won't lose Connor. Willow did have a good idea about how to bring up the 'unusual' aspects of Connor's life.
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Background Information" from AriaDragoncrest
I love leverage and buffy/angel (obviously) and you've got the 2 of them to work together well, looking forward to more
Comments from author:
Thank you- I have 3/4 of the next chp done- with luck it should be posted later today. Also keep an eye out for a oneshot which is another Connor centered one but slash.
Review By [liability] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from MaxGSandeman
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I do not know anything about the show Leverage, but you have given some hints that make your story understandable to readers like me. Please continue.
I am not sure Illyria would merely say “He should be killed for hurting Connor”. It would be more fitting to be; "The bag of protoplasmic slime, should have his spine torn from the pathetic excuse of that human form". I guess she is learning to live in the world of humans.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you are understanding the story- if you have any questions then feel free to ask and Ill do my best to answer them. This is my first time at writing Illyria- so I am still finding it hard to write her.
Review By [MaxGSandeman] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from Neverwillmini
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This works much better as chapters for one story instead of as separate stories. Wonder if his other 'mother' will turn up (or if that's another whole different story)?
Comments from author:
I don't think his 'Mother' will show up. I think it does work better as chapters- I am halfway through the next chp- so it should be up soon.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I knew that Angel was Connor's father, but I was curious as to how Nathan was going to fit in there. I've seen Leverage, and I think that Nathan is a good guy. He will definitely want to be a part of Connor's life. I'm just wondering how he will react when he finds out what Connor anf Illyria do on the side.
Comments from author:
He will want to be part of Connor's life- and for a while he won't know about that side of things. I'm not 100% sure of how Nate will deal with it once he knows but I doubt he'll give up easily. The next chp is about halfway done so it should be up soon.
Review By [kayron] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Can't wait for Connor to meet the team! I love these series, I've been reading it since the beginning. I think it was a good idea to put it all in one story. Please update again soon!
Comments from author:
Connor should meet the team in chp 4 (though he doesn't meet Eliot in this chp). The next chp will be up soon- im halfway through it.
Review By [Waverly] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated