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Review of chapter "Background Information" from Vickzie
Review:
Lol, good story. Loving the Ilyria and Connor relationship.
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [3 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Background Information" from Krysstinia
Review:
Interesting beginning. Looking forward to more.
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [25 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Background Information" from leelaa
Review:
Damn good. Please, please update soon.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Background Information" from GoddessNyx
Review:
This is pretty awesome. I'd love to see more.
Review By [GoddessNyx] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Background Information" from (Current Donor)vladt
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just enough to hook me. good read, thank you. more, please.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [22 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Background Information" from lothlorien
Review:
interesting. it should be fun when Connor meets the team... please continue soon
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [3 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Background Information" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
Nate and his friends have not asked how or when, about Conner's birth. They have a birth date. They do not know, that it is fake.

Willow's discovery about Nate's operation, certainly fills in a bit about Leverage.

A note about ch2 - "and Illyria strolled inside with a cowed looking nurse following her." I cannot imagine Illyria strolling into any room. She moves with purpose, so I could imagine the cowed nurse hurrying after her, so as to not receive more of Illyria's displeasure.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Background Information" from aveave
Review:
This is a great chapter. I hope you will write next one soon, because I would love to know what will happen.
Review By [aveave] • Date [26 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Background Information" from kayron
Review:
It's good that both Connor and Nate have people willing to look out for them. They are not as alone as they think they are. Ilyria has already lost the AI team. I don't know how much she actually cared for them, but it makes her detemined that she won't lose Connor. Willow did have a good idea about how to bring up the 'unusual' aspects of Connor's life.
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Background Information" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from liability
Review:
I love leverage and buffy/angel (obviously) and you've got the 2 of them to work together well, looking forward to more
Comments from author:
Thank you- I have 3/4 of the next chp done- with luck it should be posted later today. Also keep an eye out for a oneshot which is another Connor centered one but slash.
Review By [liability] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
I do not know anything about the show Leverage, but you have given some hints that make your story understandable to readers like me. Please continue.

I am not sure Illyria would merely say “He should be killed for hurting Connor”. It would be more fitting to be; "The bag of protoplasmic slime, should have his spine torn from the pathetic excuse of that human form".
I guess she is learning to live in the world of humans.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you are understanding the story- if you have any questions then feel free to ask and Ill do my best to answer them. This is my first time at writing Illyria- so I am still finding it hard to write her.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from Neverwillmini
Review:
This works much better as chapters for one story instead of as separate stories. Wonder if his other 'mother' will turn up (or if that's another whole different story)?
Comments from author:
I don't think his 'Mother' will show up. I think it does work better as chapters- I am halfway through the next chp- so it should be up soon.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from kayron
Review:
I knew that Angel was Connor's father, but I was curious as to how Nathan was going to fit in there. I've seen Leverage, and I think that Nathan is a good guy. He will definitely want to be a part of Connor's life. I'm just wondering how he will react when he finds out what Connor anf Illyria do on the side.
Comments from author:
He will want to be part of Connor's life- and for a while he won't know about that side of things. I'm not 100% sure of how Nate will deal with it once he knows but I doubt he'll give up easily. The next chp is about halfway done so it should be up soon.
Review By [kayron] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Meeting" from silentflux
Review:
It's very interesting how you've managed to mesh the fandoms so far. I can't wait to see how everything else interacts as well :D
Comments from author:
Thank you- I hope you like what I have planned. The next chp is about halfway done so it should be posted soon.
Review By [silentflux] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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