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Review of chapter "East Africa" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great set-up for an introduction.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "East Africa" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting way of meeting people ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "East Africa" from AXanFan
Review:
It is a little misleading to say this is Xander-Centered since he barely makes an appearance at the end and it feels like you wrote an introduction to the real story -- I really wish there was more.

I would love to hear what Xander is doing and how he would react and interact with Callen.
Comments from author:
True, but as he's the only actual series character in it....
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [24 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "East Africa" from Lady
Review:
Nice and snappy style. Bit like Callan.
Review By [Lady] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "East Africa" from gaulty
Review:
nice start, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [28 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "East Africa" from Hecatonchires
Review:
I like the idea of them naming a village Sineya
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "East Africa" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "East Africa" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and interesting back story.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "East Africa" from Dreamweaver
Review:
Ummm...Is this present-day Callen on a case for NCIS LA, or from his undercover agent days before he joined the L.A. team?

Y'know, if you follow the show, it's kinda hard to miss all the references to the ton or so (it seems like) alias' that he used in the ton or so (it seems like) undercover jobs he'd done for whatever government agency/dept he'd worked for before joining NCIS LA.
Comments from author:
It's pre-series, but after he was working for NCIS. Not yet based in L.A. (But there was some backstory in "Legend" that he'd previously worked with Gibbs on an undercover case or two, overseas, so he's possibly been with NCIS for a while. It was also mentioned that at some time prior to NCIS, he was with the DEA in a similar role.)
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "East Africa" from UrbanGhost
Review:
Excellent, i was afraid you were going to end the series at the last story. Glad to see you are still working on it!

-- UrbanGhost
Review By [UrbanGhost] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "East Africa" from hbaked
Review:
Cool.

A long bow? Nice variation in slayer weaponry.

Will you write direct conversation between Xander and Callen or will you continue to take the roundabout method? Each has its merits.

So... what's next? ;-D
Comments from author:
Dunno yet. Might do some more backstory with Xander and Callen in Kenya, as that was a request in a previous review.
Review By [hbaked] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "East Africa" from StriderMew
Review:
Very interesting... wonder what else the Legendary Callen would find.
Review By [StriderMew] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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