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Equinoxium II: The Fading

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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Jave
Review:
Great! When's the next update? Wanna see legolas again :)
Review By [Jave] • Date [14 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from SelenaWolf
Review:
Oh man, the first one was awesome - depressing, but awesome. Here's hoping this one will be a little cheerier, eh? Buffy and Legolas deserve their happily-ever-after, even if they gotta fight for it.

PS - you had me cry over Mirdan during his supposed death, and actual death. And I usually hate OC's. Thoron got a few tears too, he and buffy must have gotten a bit closer over the years I take it?
Review By [SelenaWolf] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
haha. love it!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [30 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Anglachel
Review:
So good to have you back. And very credible that the edain woulldn't entirely trust Buffy.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Anglachel] • Date [28 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bluejello
Review:
Well played, Eldarion.
I hadn't really thought about it, but I suppose even with a Númenórean king, the people of Gondor might not be comfortable with a person who does not age but appears mortal. You really do have to feel for Buffy.
Comments from author:
Yeah - Buffy really seems to always be on the outside. Even in Sunnydale, she never quite fit in. Unfortunately, the same is true in Middle-earth where she's constantly on the outside, looking in. At least now she has friends and loved ones that help make it so that otherness, the idea of being an outsider, no longer matters.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [28 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
So happy to read another chapter. I was smiling at the end thinking of Legolas scolding Buffy for taking risks.
Comments from author:
Thanks! :)
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [28 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bunney
Review:
Yay yay yay :) I love it when new posts are made And its even better when they are good
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bunney] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from JJDudeman
Review:
Hooray, more!
I found the original Equinoxium fascinating for its boldly unique aspects (what a clever hook with the blood) to match the great emotional introspections. My immediate reaction to seeing there was a sequel was ''Why? It felt complete," and it was, but to turn those same introspections of death and, in this chapter, Buffy's 'other-ness' while she still showing her vitality and life through her teasing with Elor, um, ...the king. Curious to see where you go with this journey - and that's from someone who's personally never been big on Legolas shipping. ;-)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the wonderful review! Hopefully I won't keep you waiting another year + before I get to another update. The story is fully plotted - it's just a matter of finding the time to get it written. :)
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Jave
Review:
Hahah well my begging helped.
Thanks for the update
Loved the chapter. Can't wait to see (read) Legolas' s reaction.
Review By [Jave] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from indis
Review:
First off thank you for the update, I hope things are going well for you :)

Our first Eldarion POV and he is just as awesome as I'd expect him to be (no surprise considering his parents), his reminiscing about his childhood was fun and I really liked his noting Buffy's unchanging appearance and the continuing mistrust of the humans in ME concerning it, which is good continuity following on from the first fic. There was also a nice contrast between Eldarion the king doing is duty and Eldarion the son who is grieving his parents deeply.

Looks like there's going to be a bit of a domestic between Buffy and Legolas when he arrives! And I bet Gimli will have something to say about being ditched as well. Buffy better start rehearsing her mea culpas.

As always I'm eagerly awaiting the next update.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the wonderful review! Things are going very well - busy! Active one-year old and another one on the way, combined with a wonderful husband, adorable puppy, and a full-time job. LOL - I miss my free time.

But that being said, I'm glad you enjoyed Eldarion's character. While he is in no way an OC, he also happens to be a completely blank slate. It was fun putting my own take on his character.

Thanks again!
Review By [indis] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from kiwi
Review:
an excellent update. thank you!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [kiwi] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Jave
Review:
Please please update
Comments from author:
Thanks for the poke - it was great timing as I had the very rare free time at that moment to make it happen. :) Ask and ye shall receive, apparently. :)
Review By [Jave] • Date [27 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from bradsan
Review:
Well Buffy isn't any ordinary Slayer she always did the opposite. One in the world became two then became so many. Two vampires as lovers. turning enemy's to allies, not killing every demon she saw, dying two or three times, becoming immortal etc.

So there is no happy ending for heroes knowing Buffy she changed so many things so why not this. She always was different. I really hope you'll update this story because I really love it.

And just like the story before very well written.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Jave
Review:
Can't wait for the update :)
Review By [Jave] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Callista
Review:
I love this story so far! Please update soon? I really hope Buffy and Legolas will have their 'Happily Ever After', they deserve it, but I'm sure you'll let them suffer for a while...
Cally
Review By [Callista] • Date [20 May 12] • Not Rated
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