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ShyBobReview:
Short and sweet, with good characterization of T. Now I want to see the corporate retreat where instructors from all the DeSalvo's get together!
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ShyBob] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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GideonReview:
He really should have chosen a practical interview, though I don't know if Teal'c would be best with a sword.
Comments from author:
He doesn't need to be. Dojo's train, generally, in unarmed martial arts as well, not only armed. Plus, there are a variety of other weapons to train on, as well.
Thank you for the read and the review!
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Gideon] • Date [17 Jun 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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ozarkrunnerReview:
"Tallahassee"
Awesome!
XD
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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ozarkrunner] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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TammyJetReview:
Wow, I could see this and it's so awkward it's funny. Thank you, you made me smile :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing. I pulled those two names from my hat and this was what happened. I'm glad it was funny!
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TammyJet] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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erikthevikingReview:
It made me laugh, thanks.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed this little bit.
Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [23 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
