Poor Luke! You captured his probable response to that kind of emotional crisis (and the fact that Lorelai would have to be the one to nudge him into opening that can of worms in the first place) very nicely.
Comments from author:
Poor Luke gets stuck with all the crazies.
I'm so happy to hear you think I captured Luke well, as I almost never write him. Thank you so much for reviewing and letting me know that!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Apr 10] • Not Rated
I just finished your whole serie of stories and can only say "Wow!" I loved each and every one of your stories. The only problem was they were all too short. I'd have loved to read more of each. Wow! Thanks for some terrific reading. I look forward to more of your work.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I know they're short, but I like the little 'slice of life' feel. That, and it's much easier when literally drawing these things from a hat. But check back, 'cause I'm trying to write these pretty often, to keep myself from getting rusty.
Thank you for your review!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated