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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from omnimercurial
Interesting Plothook! :)

I'm liking this. Probably redundant asking you to continue writing four years after this was posted but I'm going to ask in the hope you do so anyway. :D

Please write more! ;)
Review By [omnimercurial] • Date [25 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM
Keep going. Please? I can see her writing over the doodles to save paper. Farscape is worthy of a crossover.No! You've gotta do something or just don't be evil! lol. Farscape is awesome xover
with Buff.
Review By [PATM] • Date [26 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nemogbr
Interesting start and not sure about killing Willow in the first chapter. I would presume that she is just in a coma.

Wonder how this will develop the remaining Slayers on Earth and will there be enough of the Watchers Council to assist them.#

The Slayers as superior genetic stock might become targets of the Peacekeepers.
Looking forward to seeing how Aeryn Sun ends up in the leviathan.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [26 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Tempi
An interesting beginning. A farscape/BtVS crossover is pretty rare so I look forward to reading more.

I would appreciate an overview of the people on the bus.

Regarding Willows's death: a bit harsh, but plenty of other stories on TtHM starts with horrible things happening to one or more of the Scoobies. Assuming she stays dead, it would make the Slayers' stay in the Farscape verse a bit more challenging, but that could open up some interesting story plots. On the other hand the alien technology in Farscape have been known to revive people thought dead quite a lot.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [26 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MistofRainbows
Not the best ending, and well good luck with it. But really a simple air generation breathing spell shouldn't really be that hard, and really I seriously doubt your assessment of the power needed to have a bubble of air, and I thought all the dumb idiot slayers died in the pit. Ah well here's to the o.c. being a soulless bitch. And yes bluntly killing Willow off is, what's the word narcissistic and twisted. There were plenty of other ways to get the stupid bus there, including having it sent to a planet or having Willow not there.. Never mind anything else I write would just be a flame.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus

Willow ;_;

Good work. Still wondering who is the one talking.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Well, that's a thing!

No, didn't see Mary Sue. Will wait for next chapter to decide on that. The killing of Willow, assuming she actually stays dead... little more brutal and heartless than necessary.

Very Important Note: even if you HATE a character, character disregard tends to turn people off, even other people who also HATE that character. OK, then... that said, I'm gonna read chapter 2 if you write it.


Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Now this is a beginning I don't recall ever seeing before.

I'm going to be following this to see where you're taking it.

And which of the Slayers is writing the diary?
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Interesting start, be interested to see where you go with it.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from burmafrdnow
Sorry but this story just does not make any sense. Bus in the middle of space. More like a parody then a story. And sounds like a Mary Sue one as well. Pass.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoeDineen
Interesting start, takes gumption to kill off Willow from the get go.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [25 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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