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Review of chapter "3" from MaxPayne
Review:
Excellent fic...
Review By [MaxPayne] • Date [16 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from trongod
Review:
I think you should screw with the time line/incidents so as to allow either Faith to meet the New And Improved Xander before she meets clone!Xander... that'd be a mind bender for everybody Earth side.

Another thing is, why stay with canon and let Jenny die? Angelus is more the type to stash her somewhere for prolonged torture, then dump the body on Giles after revealing (a) the original body found was magically glamoured to resemble Jenny, and (b) the present corpse had been in Angelus' possession for X amount of time and the so-called lover never even tried to avenge her.
(Yeah, the entire 'Giles/Buffy reject Jenny and allow Angelus free reign' REALLY pisses me off; let them know down to their sous how badly they screwed up everything.)

Now the quasi Alteran has a HOT!Technomage on his side as well as a HOT!Slayer not into necrophilia, with the possibilities of lots and lots and lots of sex for all......
Review By [trongod] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from AXanFan
Review:
I stopped reading the "Halloween" stories some time ago -- most either rehashed other stories I had read, were about characters I really couldn't get into or were just too far out for me. Not sure what made me read this one when I came across it -- maybe just because I tend to like the Stargate x-overs.

First I am glad that you kept some of Xander's real personality in tact. I don't think I would enjoy reading if he had become so different as to be unrecognizable. I would really love to read more -- I think Xander and Jack could be really great friends -- they actually have a lot of personality traits in common, especially their respective sense of humor. With his newly gained knowledge, I also think he and Daniel could be good friends too.

I would also like to see what will happen when he goes back to help at Sunnydale -- will he stay hidden or risk contact and how will he explain who he is?

I know it has been a while since you updated, but I hope you still plan to -- and soon.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [10 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Just read these three chapters again. I'm still a big fan of this concept in crossover fictions (been reading a lot of them where Harry Potter is in the Xander role) as it has such potential to blow large holes into the SG universe's canon. I'm hoping you're still planning on continuing this story and an update might come along before too long
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [22 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Raider
Review:
in this case, I can agree, dropping travers into the sun sounds awful tempting.
Review By [Raider] • Date [21 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Interesting idea, I may have to do something similar myself to see how it plays out.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Oh, very interesting course of action for Xander to take. I like it a lot. When the Tok'ra get wind of him working for the Tau'ri they'll probably freak the hell out. Awesome
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [17 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
LOVE IT!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Genuka
Review:
You did good. Can't wait to see what else you're gonna turn out. *giant grin*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Godogma
Review:
quasi not quash-Alteran.... God that got old quick.

Not much to say here, but then again there wasn't much said in the chapter, it was very small and didn't carry the plot forward. I'll keep watching in hopes this gets better.
Review By [Godogma] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from nemogbr
Review:
Looking forward to the interaction between Moros and Xander. It would be good to rescue Faith from herself =, before too much damage is done to her psyche.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Vilkath
Review:
Angel was not a hero, he did not fight the good fight out of any need for redemption or higher calling. He did it to impress a girl, he wallowed around selfishly doing nothing for over a century even after he got his soul, it wasn't until he got pushed towards buffy and later bribed with the reward of being turned human did Angel really pick up the good fight. Even then he turned towards selfish desires quite often in later seasons when his own love life or family was concerned. To me Angel lacked the real sefless hero quality all because he was working towards a goal and a reward. He helped people, especialy once he left Buffy and went to LA. But he didn't really have any more selfless tendancies than a cop who was paid to do it.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from StriderMew
Review:
Quash-Alteran?? or Quasi-Alteran?? Methinks you might have mistaken those two.

Main Entry: 1quash
Pronunciation: \ˈkwäsh, ˈkwȯsh\
Function: transitive verb
Etymology: Middle English quashen to smash, from Anglo-French quasser, casser, from Latin quassare to shake violently, shatter, frequentative of quatere to shake
Date: 13th century: to suppress or extinguish summarily and completely

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Main Entry: qua·si
Pronunciation: \ˈkwā-ˌzī, -ˌsī; ˈkwä-zē, -sē\
Function: adjective
Etymology: quasi-
Date: 1642

1 : having some resemblance usually by possession of certain attributes
2 : having a legal status only by operation or construction of law and without reference to intent
Comments from author:
English not me native language. Mistakes happen :))))
Review By [StriderMew] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from eriktheviking
Review:
An interesting and entertaining update, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Robby
Review:
Awesome chapter, great way to get Alex into the game!
Review By [Robby] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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