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Review of chapter "Unable to Stay" from Morgomir
Review:
Great start. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much! :)
Ms. Sunshine
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [29 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unable to Stay" from RevDorothyL
Review:
So, this isn't post-season 3/"The Goliath Chronicles", but rather going AU at some point in season 2 (early season 2, pre-Avalon, I'm thinking, since Elisa and Goliath wouldn't be in 'rejection' mode when they'd become so close during their world travels), correct?

You might want to include a note specifying at what episode you're departing from "Gargoyles" canon, so that obsessive fans like myself can better orient ourselves to whatever comes next.

That said, I'm looking forward to reading the adventures of Goliath's clan in Sunnydale (a note about where this falls in the BtVS timeline would be helpful, too, when you get to that point).
Comments from author:
Thanks for the heads up. As I hadn't any specific starting point for this story (besides midway season two, gargoyles) I completely spaced on the whole posting that particular info, sorry. I will go back and post that shortly. Thanks for your review and support and I hope that you continue to enjoy my work.
Ms. Sunshine
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unable to Stay" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
This is a nasty one, well written. I suspect Goliath's going to be very hard to put up with for a while.. I wonder about when you have it diverging?

If Elisa follows, and I rather think she might, given the opportunity, the next question is how she learns of the location of the Hellmouth. A snarling confrontation with Demona should do the trick..

Finally, if the Illuminati exist, is Quentin Travers a member?
Comments from author:
First of all, I would like to thank you for your review. Then I'd like to dive right in and say... well pretty much nothing. Any reply on the points you've brought up will completely spoil any plots twists I may or may not have planned for future parts in this series. You've struck a lot of notes here and I would hate to give anything away so early :)
Thanks again, MsSunshine
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [29 Apr 10] • Not Rated
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