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Review of chapter "Urge" from adoxerella
Review:
I stand by my earlier statement of interesting, and my claim that this does not in any way constitute a 'kiss of death'. I would nudge you in the direction of remembering that the interesting dreams are the ones we most often recall, while the boring ones slip off into our subconscious un-remembered.

Liam is an strange entity in these stories. My brain says he should be part Angel, since he is the soul, not a separate entity. Angel is Liam with 150 years of killing posing as growing up. Yet you manage to make a convincing argument that Liam is someone else entirely. A scared young man who is so far out of his element by this point that he isn't sure he will ever be able to finds his way back again. I find myself annoyed at the rest of the Others because someone should figure out that he can't do this on his own and help him through. Actually, Angelus probably has figured it out. He just thinks the fact that the rest haven't and are letting the boy struggle is funny.

Then there is Sam, who I am postulating is the person who surprised you so much by turning up. I am not quite sure of what to make of him here. He seems to spur Liam into action where none of the Others could. I would have seen the confrontation between the two as occurring between Angel and Sam if you had proposed the argument alone to me, but I like it this way more. To have Liam condemning Sam seems much more effective.

This review probably makes no sense. I claim lack of coffee, and sit here waiting to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
I have to respond to this on YIM because I don't want to start rambling and spoil anyone. But...*wibbles*
Review By [adoxerella] • Date [30 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Urge" from mendenbar
Review:
I love dreams, or should this be a nightmare? Jumbled and confused yet so revealing.
Comments from author:
Oh, yes, this was a nightmare. Thank you for, I honestly believe, understanding my intent with this chapter. Thank you again for reading and reviewing.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [30 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Urge" from leelaa
Review:
It feels like after ages that you've added another instalment to this arc. And as for the review adjective - I hope your work in this arc never falls short of superlatives -, Terrific.
Comments from author:
See, I was trying to ignore my muse. So it's my fault. I should have known better. I DO know better. Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying it so much.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [30 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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