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Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Vickzie
Review:
Lmao brilliant story!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [3 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Netchka
Review:
Ha! I Love it! Is there a sequel coming? Please? Pretty Please? Can't wait.
Comments from author:
You can actually find more of this story in the A Touch of Connor story that TouchoftheWind and I are doing in a sort of round robin fashion. There's an index on the first page to tell you which set of drabbles you're looking for.

I'm glad you liked it!
Review By [Netchka] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
I really liked this. You captured the manic intensity of someone like Connor quite well.

I just wonder how this all fits in with Kevin and Garcia probably being broken up, judging from some of last season. And of course we all ship Morgan/Garcia anyway.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it and that you feel my characterization was good.

I, uh, haven't actually kept up with the series? So I'm not really sure what you're talking about with the breaking up thing. That said, I do, first and foremost, ship Morgan/Garcia, but mostly I want everyone to be happy. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Zakhynsia
Review:
I loved that. The mix of the two worked well. I don't like Kevin usually (its Xander but its not but it is) but I really liked him here. Xander was a little hard, but how he blended in with the "family" was great.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's actually a harder mix than I'd figured it would be. I like Kevin, honestly, but I still expect that relationship to implode.
Review By [Zakhynsia] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
Oh, gosh, I laughed my butt off at that ending. Hilarious. Crazy Wolfram and Hart--I can see their research and development coming up with that.

Fun story! Really interesting take on Connor's new life.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. You know they'd take it in the complete opposite directions, just to be contrary.
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [15 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from GoldenRat
Review:
I feel sorry for Conner having to suffer the 'am I crazy' thing, but glad for the happy ending and the crossover with Criminal Minds was very nice.
Comments from author:
Well, it couldn't be all kittens and sunshine but it turned out okay in the end. Glad you liked it.
Review By [GoldenRat] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from spacey
Review:
i dont think this was meant to be goofy but dammit it was and fun to boot!
Comments from author:
Oh, but it was meant to be goofy. The serious bits only cropped up enough to keep the plot rolling. All by design. Uh huh. ;)~
Review By [spacey] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Oh my god! That ending was awesome! Though, now I wanna see a Connor/Spencer sequel.....lol! Wonderful, wonderful story!

~ Kyra
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'm thinking oneshot...
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [30 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from MinaLynn
Review:
I laughed so hard I cried over these parts:

Connor glanced back at the BAU offices and something flickered over his face before he settle on indifference and asked casually, “So, uh, is Spencer Reid seeing anybody?”

And Kevin totally walked into a wall as Xander stopped, mouth gaping. Because, seriously, that was how Wolfram and Hart took care of the attraction to older women? By making him gay? Seriously?

 
Comments from author:
It was, maybe, my favorite part. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from tosca
Review:
LOL! Great ending. Awesome story. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it. :)
Review By [tosca] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Elleria
Review:
Sequel please???
Comments from author:
I won't make any promises. Glad you liked it.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from SlaughterDaughter
Review:
Oh my gosh! I can't believe it's over!! Great ending though!
Loved when Connor asked about Spencer XD
Maybe you could do like a sequel about them dating? you probably won't, but I would just love that.
Comments from author:
All good things, well, you know the rest. :)
It just had to happen.
I'm thinking more along the lines of a oneshot, actually, because I like playing with this Connor and I think it'd be fun.
Review By [SlaughterDaughter] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
Cute.

And that last line? I swear I just had an image of Reid doing one of his eidetic(sp?) memory babbles and Xander kissing him to shut him up.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Techinically, it'd be Connor doing the kissing, at least according to this story. ;)~
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from twlight
Review:
Oh this is just way way beyond wonderful. I love this Connor.
Comments from author:
Thanks. He's just so much fun to play with.
Review By [twlight] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from purrfus
Review:
I've just become addicted to Criminal Minds, and then found this tonight.

Wonderfully twisted. I was so not ready for this to be over.

More please.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Sadly, except for maybe a short oneshot kind of deal, this is finished.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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