Review of chapter "Chapter One: Displaced" from mellusene
This story is interesting so far! Are you going to explain why Harry/Jamie is so magically weak? That part confused me. Also the 'taking time off before college' bit suggests the Jamie is 18ish, but you say later that he is 25. Is he tying to throw his age off deliberately to help with his disguise?
As for pairings, I would like to see Hermione with Sam or Dean or Xander. Dawn with Sam or Dean. Draco with a slayer, and maybe Ginny with Xander?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Comments from author:
I am going to explain why Harry is so weak it's a plot point. You are dead on about the age discrepency, it helps with his disguise and has the added benefit of being able to explain why a young brit is trekking about America being touristy. Thanks for Reading and Reviewing!
Review By [mellusene
] • Date [3 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Displaced" from MissShifty
Interesting chapter. I can't wait to see where this story leads.
As for pairings, I'm voting for either Harry/Dean or Harry/Spike. If not Harry/Spike, then Xander/Spike. Ummm, as for the het. pairings...maybe Willow/Sam or Buffy/Sam, or even possibly Hermione/Sam? Joyce/Giles if possible. There aren't very many females in these fandoms to work with, I'm afraid. However, if you get the early season Angel crew in, I would kill to see a Buffy/Doyle, Cordelia/Doyle, or Willow/Doyle pairing. If it's late season, then Fred/Wesley would be good.
Review By [MissShifty
] • Date [2 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Displaced" from GACTsevil
You should do some Harry/Dean ;)
Review By [GACTsevil
] • Date [2 May 10] • Not Rated