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Review of chapter "Too bad" from (Recent Donor)Angellia
Review:
Interesting addition to the episode. I'm glad Dean didn't go off with Faith
Comments from author:
Thanks :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Angellia] • Date [19 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Too bad" from PenelopePendragon
Review:
perfect he turned down faith hallelujah for that and dammit Buffy tell him you love him pooh on her but awesome job more pls
Comments from author:
Yeppers! I'm working on the next story, it'll be up soon!
Review By [PenelopePendragon] • Date [11 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Too bad" from ErinWinchester
Review:
Great job! These were great chapters :) Though I do kind of want to slap buffy upside the head right about now, lol. Update soon? The next should be even better then this one, its the whole Faith tortures Dean one right? Fuuuuun :) Haha.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much and I'm glad you like it so far! I'm in the planning stage right now but I'll have the next story posted ASAP!
Review By [ErinWinchester] • Date [11 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Too bad" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Whew, thank goodness he didn't cross that line! Not sure he could have gotten Buffy to forgive him for that one. Some random girl in Arizona, maybe, but Faith? Nuh-uh.
Comments from author:
Yup! even Dean's not dumb enough to get involved with Faith! I love Faith, she's cool but she ain't Buffy
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [10 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Touch of Heaven" from ErinWinchester
Review:
Hahaha! Nice.
I like how he actually said he loved Buffy out loud, kind of, in a dream. :P
One thing I noticed is that in your Time line I think it would be cool to have a story about when Sam leaves for Stanford, even if that would be all angsty, lol. Oh, and maybe when John first dissapears (I totally spelt that wrong didnt I?). But obviously thats all up to you, miss she who updates quickest, :)
Oh! Update :D
Comments from author:
Lol thank you! I think I agree with those story ideas, the timeline keeps getting longer cuz I get another story idea everytime I watch an episode lol. I'm working on the last 2 chapters and will post them tomorrow at the latest! Thanks for the suggestions!
Review By [ErinWinchester] • Date [8 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Touch of Heaven" from PenelopePendragon
Review:
the fact it was a dream totally threw me you evil thing but awesome jopb otherwise i demand more now
Comments from author:
lol I know I'm totally evil for that! It was in my head and I enjoy picking on Dean so I couldn't help it!
Review By [PenelopePendragon] • Date [7 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second Chances" from ErinWinchester
Review:
I love how you could hve made Dean be all angsty at the end, but let the snow put a smile on his face instead :) It made me smile too!
Update!
Comments from author:
Yup Happy Dean is a lot better than angsty Dean!
Review By [ErinWinchester] • Date [6 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enemy of my enemy and all that rot" from ErinWinchester
Review:
Wow.How is it even possible for you to write that fast? I'm kind of in Awe. Good Job!
P.S. Update :)
Comments from author:
lol yea I was on a writing roll!
Review By [ErinWinchester] • Date [5 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "'Tis the season" from ErinWinchester
Review:
Ha Wow! Nice updating!
I feel like I should be all "You've done enough for a while... Take a break :)" but I can't, so instead ill say "Hey! You! Hurry and Update again please!"
Comments from author:
lol thanks! This story's gonna be maybe 2 or 3 more chapters, lot shorter than the rest but it's coming along good so far. Keep reading!
Review By [ErinWinchester] • Date [4 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Holiday spirits" from ErinWinchester
Review:
Yay! More Chapters :)
Now hurry and update some more, Lol.
Comments from author:
Lol I'm working on it ;) lol
Review By [ErinWinchester] • Date [4 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second verse, same as the first" from PenelopePendragon
Review:
this story keeps getting better and better sweetie continue pls
Comments from author:
Yay glad you like so far!
Review By [PenelopePendragon] • Date [4 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Second verse, same as the first" from (Recent Donor)Angellia
Review:
Nice, glad you started the new one. I suspect lots of angst to come :S Looking forward to reading some more
Comments from author:
Yep it took me all weekend to figure out how I wanted it to go and where I wanted to start at.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Angellia] • Date [3 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second verse, same as the first" from ErinWinchester
Review:
I literally wait for your storys! Hurry and update!
Comments from author:
Yay thank you!
Review By [ErinWinchester] • Date [3 May 10] • Not Rated
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