HolyCow! I love this. Excellent way to do these two genres and really bring Xander's humanity to the fore. I do so hope you have more, and also, more time in real life.
Review By [trecebo] • Date [12 Jan 11] • Not Rated
This is terrible, how did Xander become Seer, how did he live? I really cannot wait to see the answers to my questions and how they all escape from the Alliance.
Thanks Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [19 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Eh can't really buy into the whole 'super alliance' angle of this chapter. I mean come on how the heck does so many ships land in one place without anyone noticing. Soldiers get inside without any one noticing? Then specialist ON call to break into Xanders mind, having the perfect tools for the job when they didn't even know what they would find?
Then Xander just standing around doing nothing constructive. Sort of disapointing all around to see the bad guys get a 'free pass' on kicking ass and taking names.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [18 May 10] • Not Rated