It's a shame that you haven't done anything with this story in a while, because it was certainly an auspicious beginning.
I'm curious about the crossover(s) you've planned. Does Xander's residence in Colorado Springs mean something or is that a coincidence? Maybe the glowing lady could've been an Ascended Ancient if this was indeed an xover with the Stargate verse.
I hope that you'll find your way back to this, 'cause it shows some promise.
Review By [ElDani] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Interesting idea. I wonder what a more jaded Xander would do over the next couple of years with the info he now has? Would he tell the gang what he knows?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [4 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
I enjoy time travel fics, usually because you have a more decisive Xander. Seeing as you've alway written a pretty decisive Xander I can't wait to see what's coming down the pike with this fic.
Your writing style is solid, but I don't have any idea where you're headed that others haven't been before. I trust you so I'm here for the whole ride.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [7 May 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]