This is a brilliant story. I love Xander in this. Rose is great too, and I don't normally like Rose that much. I hope you decide to continue this. Keep up the great work.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I am adoring this fic so far. It's just... guh. I can't even describe why I like it, but I do. I love Rose, and the Doctor, and the Tardis, and their interactions with Xander. I adore Xander.
Review By [escagirluk] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Not Rated
This is fantastic. I love the way that you are writing Rose, many people treat her as an after thought and some even treat her like she is stupid. I love her in this story and I look forward to the next part.
Thanks Calia
Comments from author:
YAY! I think Rose is awesome and often gets a bad rap in fic. She was many things, good or bad, but she was definitely not stupid. I personally adore her.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [14 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
The TARDIS has a crush on Xander! *squee!* What is it with that boy and women of the non-human variety?
Anyhoo, am really enjoying this story. Doctor is a wonderful mix of cranky and friendly. Love the inner thoughts he has, especially about Rose.
Also enjoyed the scene with Buffy & Wills. That mix of unthinking cruelty and unconditional love was spot on. They hurt him with thier words and actions, but never really mean to and are horrifiyed when they notice the effects. And they love him enough to let him find his own destiny. That was the perfect scoobie mix of pain and love.
More soon I hope.
Comments from author:
ROFL, doesn't everything, both good and bad, end up having a crush on Xander? LOL, poor guy. Still, the TARDIS is a vast improvement over others who have sought his companionship. ;)
I love Nine/Rose, so I'm pleased you think I'm writing them well. I like Ten and I love Rose, but I don't really care for Rose/Ten. Rose/Nine, however, is, for me at least, total win.
So glad you liked the Buffy and Willow stuff. A lot of fic I read which features Xander as a main character seems to argue that Buffy and Willow are unfeeling towards him, which I don't find true at all. They may be unthinking, but certainly not unfeeling. They love him deeply, as he does them, but they just don't seem to communicate it very well.
Glad you liked!
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Its true you never forget your first Dr, and this is such a brilliant take on him, and how he would embrace xander. and so true to Rose as well. you to a wonderful job with the characters and i cant wait to see how you write him into their adventures, and when you write in Jack or Mickey as well, or even Jackie.
having him talk to the TARDIS seems a but much right after the way the departure went, had almost wanted that scene to play off with more yelling and drama, though it to was well done and was believable just not what where i thought the fic has been leading. -
but anxiously waiting the next stop of the TARDIS
lanna
Comments from author:
You never do forget your first! Doctor, that is. ;)
I just love Nine. *hearts him* We will definitely see Xander interact with Jack and Jackie. I'm not sure about Mickey, just yet. I enjoyed Mickey well enough, but I'm not so sure how well I could write him. We'll have to see. :D
I had Xander talk to the TARDIS immediately upon entering because I knew it would shut the Doctor up pretty quickly. He might be unsure about bringing Xander with them, but with the TARDIS almost ordering him that it was necessary, he won't question it too much. So even though he's uneasy about Xander's presence, he's more accepting. Plus, it also allows him to feel not too badly about giving in to Rose so relatively easily. ;)
Review By [froggy] • Date [28 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Come Into My World" from Omegaprime
Review:
Hmmmm, Xander traveling through time and space? Nice. Wonder what sights he will see. Will he meet up with the Dalecks or the Cybermen? I love how Buffy threatened the Doctor and how did he know Joyce anyway?
Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Ah, how *did* the Doctor know Joyce? I'm still not sure myself! I threw that in there at the last minute, not really sure why, and I don't know what I'm going to do with it, if anything. It all depends on what Joyce tells me and how involved she wants to be in this.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [28 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
