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Power Rangers Demon Wars:- The Dragon's Green Fire

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Review of chapter "Epilogue, Part II" from wswords
Review:
Loved the story, glad it got finished.
Review By [wswords] • Date [17 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue, Part II" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Congratulations and well done.

Buffy may believe that the hardest thing in this world is to live in it... but then, she's not a writer ;) Clearly the hardest thing in this world is to finish an epic length story!

I never watched more than one or two episodes of the Power Rangers, but I decided to give your story a try on a whim. It hooked me and sucked me in and made me wish that the PR eps I did catch weren't so campy (hey, live action cartoon *shrugs*) because your story would have made a heck of a season and have been well worth watching.

Anyway, in holding with my personal rules, your completed work, being excellent has been added to my recommended readings list.

Bravo
Comments from author:
Thank you very much, it's been an odd one to write. While a slog to plan it was almost too easy to write... I can see where you're coming from with the too campy aspect but believe me it got a lot better. Track down the Five part Green with Evil. Not perfect, but shows what you can do with a battle

One fun bit I have to boast about though, you mentioned it would have been an interesting season to watch. Well an average season of Power Rangers lasts 30 episodes. 93 chapters, three chapters (acts) per "episode"... That's where the planning comes in!

Thanks for the review and thank you very much for the recommendation

Thomas
AKA Mountain King
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [15 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue, Part II" from Harry
Review:
Its been a great ride. And I look forward to anything else, from your Thundercats story, to your Doctor Who material, to anything else you come up with, to read and review. And I have been helping out somewhat with a mega story here on this site called Code Ragnarok: Battlefield and The Black Widow Squad in the Stargate area. And I look forward, as I said before, to reading anything new you will be posting.
Review By [Harry] • Date [15 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue, Part I" from cwolf
Review:
Ah. Good. A form of a happy ending at least. Dawn is still alive in a sense.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [30 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue, Part I" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, I must have somehow missed the alert or something because I only just found this.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue, Part I" from Harry
Review:
Rita and Zedd WERE right! I saw the hint. That flash of Green Energy. Dawn may not have a physical form, but she is still around! Time to prepare for the Key Quest and get a hold of a certain Time Traveler. *Hello there, I'm the Doctor. Would you care for a Jelly Baby?* And I see some hint in this chapter of Ragnarok. BRING THEM IN! We can use them.
Comments from author:
Yep, Dawnie Ascended and Buffy doesn't have the first clue just what that means. Or what the Quest is going to entail.

Hell I only have a rough idea and I'm writing it!

Thanks for the review.

Thomas
Review By [Harry] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Invasion, Chapter Thirteen" from cwolf
Review:
That hit hard. You definitely know how to pull out all the stops
Review By [cwolf] • Date [3 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Invasion, Chapter Thirteen" from Harry
Review:
NO, NO, AND HELL NO! This is NOT the end! Dawn and the gang have a quest to do in the future and there is NO WAY she is going to die! Its time to put her in stasis till her condition can be stabilized and healed. THEN, its KEY QUEST time!
Comments from author:
I'm afraid it's time to brush off your Doors collection, because in the words of Jim Morrison for Dawn well... http://youtu.be/z9IIn3R6_50

She be dead, very dead and unless Buffy does something incredibly stupid, like say track down the Guardians that first created the Keys in some sort of quest. She ain't coming back!

Thanks for the review!

Thomas
AKA Mountain King
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Invasion, Chapter Thirteen" from CageFire
Review:
Err, okay, that's unexpected. We'll see what the last few chapters bring. :)
Comments from author:
Insert evil laugh here

Thank you as ever for reading and reviewing over the last few years I hope while it's surprising it wasn't unwelcome.

Thanks again
Thomas
AKA Mountain King
Review By [CageFire] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Invasion, Chapter Thirteen" from djhardim
Review:
Good

Considering how badly hurt Dawn is, it would appear that the only way to save her is to use a sarcophagus.

I suppose that Kinsey will be blaming the Rangers for everything that has happened.
Comments from author:
Nope.

She be dead. Dead as a can of Spam... I'd quote the dead parrot sketch from Monty python but you get the idea. Dawn is, I'm sorry to say, no more.

As for Kinsey, well he's no longer part of the picture. His ending was a little bit muddled. He is either dead or in hiding with a Goa'uld in his head. Whatever happened he's no longer in a position of blaming anyone.

Thanks for reading and reviewing

Thomas
AKA Mountain King
Review By [djhardim] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Invasion, Chapter Thirteen" from Musicalife
Review:
I'm crying right now, well done!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the compliment

Thomas
AKA Mountain King
Review By [Musicalife] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Invasion, Chapter Thirteen" from TTrunks
Review:
Evil lol, but Power Rangers never die. I'll be interested to see how it turns out well.

I'm also sort of annoyed you didn't have Tommy come back at all. It makes him seem weak and useless that during the Ranger's big confrontation he ran away. Tommy wouldn't have done that. His charges needed him an he wasn't' their. Unless of course it comes up in an Epilogue. Honestly I kept hoping you'd have other Ranger teams show up or something....
Comments from author:
There will be other teams in the Epilogue. A cameo here and a plot thread there, so don't give up hope.

As for Tommy, this wasn't his fight. If a Slayer like Buffy gets nearly killed as side project Tommy, now entirely human with almost no powers what so ever, wouldn't be any more useful than Marcus was. As it is he's trapped on the Apollo with the injured Slayers. There is a reason for this, which you will see.

And as for Dawn. I have to tell you she'd dead. As dead as any one in Buffy, Stargate, Power Rangers, Transformers and fantasy fiction in general...

Thanks for the Review
Thomas
AKA Mountain King
Review By [TTrunks] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Invasion, Chapter Twelve" from FTKnight
Review:
Very nice work. Normally i hate the Noble sacrifice think, but I can live with it.
Comments from author:
This is the beginning of the true end for the villain. Remember that A'Zores is a copy of Marcus. He, in his own reality, surrendered and accepted becoming a soulless monster. His hatred of the Warlord for his own cowardice is a form of guilt. Hating himself for his own actions even as he sees them echoed in others his only reaction is to lash out.

This has been his defining trait, and to come face to face with a truly brave and selfless Marcus is the ultimate rebuke. The ultimate there but for the grace of god. Whatever happens in the next chapter, the final confrontation, he's already lost, metaphorically.

That's why I included the nobel sacrifice here. Why Marcus had to die and just why we had to lead to this place.

Thanks for reading and the review

Thomas
AKA Mountain King
Review By [FTKnight] • Date [9 Aug 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Invasion, Chapter Twelve" from CageFire
Review:
Great to see a new chapter. Sad for marcus and dawn.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Invasion, Chapter Twelve" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Damn! I was pulling for Marcus!!!

Sounds like it's time for Dawn to go Darth Vader on A'zores...
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [6 Aug 13] • Not Rated
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