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Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from juansiete
Review:
GOOD STORY
Review By [juansiete] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Harry
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I think that its time that Nick filled Stark in on what the President has told him. Its time to end this war and concentrate on the threat that the Villians pose. As for Mystique, I think that what she finds out about Kitty will surprise her. And perhaps, Kitty and Mystique can learn something from each other.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Harry
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It'll be nice to see Kitty in action. She is Ninja trained and quite cabable as a fighter. And if they need another computer expert, Kitty can do that too! She helped design all the electronics for the Midnight Flyer of Excalibur! As for Emma, I still think she may be uncounciously manipulating Scott. But, only time will tell on that.

As far as Fuiry is concerned, it might be time to call a truce and explain the situation to Cap. I think a lot of the Heroes would stop the fight to stop the villians.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Harry
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The President has the right idea in bringing Fury in for a chat. If the Villians are uniting, and it looks like they are, then its time to start cutting back on hunting the heroes and start working on stopping the villians.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Harry
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I think Jen was right in what she said to Bruce. He needs to get some rest and then he and Cable will do much better in adapting the armor. As for Jean and Logan, I have only one thing to say: YES! If anyone could heal Logan's heart over loosing Mariko, it would be Jean. Now, lets see if they can convince Fury that someone in his organization is playing him DIRTY!
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Harry
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Well, things are heating up between Felicity and Parker. That comes as no surprise. But the way that Logan dealt with Jean's news shows the Samurai in him. Logan is a man of honor and loyalty. If anyone would be willing to acquiesce to Jean's request, it would be him.

And I think that while this war is going on, Eric and Xavier should sit down and talk. Try and work out plans for what they can do to start healing the differences in philosophy between the two. If what Logan said is correct, and the world would just dump on them, perhaps they should think about unitiing and seeing if they can find ways to work out things so that if and when peace comes, the two sides can work together at times.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
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Well, Magneto and the Brotherhood was a pleasant aid to both Logan's team as well as Nightcrawler's team. And sooner or later, Logan and Scott WILL tangle again, with only one left standing.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
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Well, the war is about to take off in full force. And while Doom may have something in mind. I smell someone like the Skrull trying to mess things up. As for Magnus and his group, I am not totally surprised. Eric and Xavier are twin sides of the same coin and as such are easy to work together when the decide to.

As for Scott and Emma, I suspect that when the time comes, Emma is going to loose her telepathy and be left with her diamond form, if even that! And Scott, you may as well forget about getting Jean back. She is going with Logan!
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
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Well, it sounds like Cap is beginning to be suspicious of someone in SHIELD. Its not Fury, but it might be one of his subordanates or even Norman Osborn. Either way, there is trouble brewing!
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
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Nick hit it right on the money. This new law will cause the super hero community to become split down the middle. And when groups split like that, it leads to the possiblity of outside manipulations. This could lead to the Skrull and other shape shifters slipping in and causing all sorts of havok to advance their cause of taking over the Earth.
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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Logan has alwasy been a favorite of mine. So, if anyone is going to lead this revolution, its him. While Stark and Rhodes may have meant well, all they are doing is causing ultra conservatives to rise up. They will cause anyone with super powers to register and work for SHIELD, or else go to the camps. If that happens we see Days of Future Past happening. And you do NOT want that happening!
Review By [Harry] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Eureka
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Nice to finally (!!!!) see an update. I know this was a low priority, but dang! A year almost? I thought y'all had cut and run on this one.

Glad they were able to get everyone out, and very glad that Kitty is going to be OK. PLEASE don't make us wait that long again for an update.
Comments from author:
I know I know my bad. The fact you've had to wait so long is my fault eureka as I drove headlong into more and more new fics without finishing my older ones first, it is the curse of a fanfiction writer. Sometimes we have more ideas than we can deal with, I will do my best to get the next chapter out much sooner. Glad you enjoyed it (razial)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [9 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from texaswookie
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Alright an update. Still loving this tale even if I ain't a big fan of Black Cat. Its a great tale and I had begun to fear you had left it or something. Love the fact that it was the government that decided to cross the line first. Hopefully the response is very obvious and they maybe make a statement that the next time some of the government goons attempt to kill the rebels will have to answer with equal amount of force or something. Can hardly wait.
Personally I think that you should have added Jubes as part of the group Logan considers his kids even if they are now on different sides of the fight. You've also given yourself the chance to add in more characters now as well.
I hope you update soon because I can hardly wait to see the reaction of attempting to kill is going to have on this tale of yours. Though I have to wonder why didn't Kitty tackle and phase the both of them out of the way? Its her usual MO. Unless your going to go with she just reacted as a way around it.
Comments from author:
Yeah I know I've left it very late to update but I was busy with my other fics but I am back on this now and I hope to get the next chapter out much sooner, as for Kitty she did indeed react out of fear of kurt been killed and did not have time or think about phasing. It also serves another purpose for me which will become clear next chapter (razial)
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [9 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ramenth
Review:
So, wait, this is the Civil War plotline in the Ultimate Marvel verse?
Comments from author:
it is not the exact story line from the comics but has elements from it, this is a combinton of the civil war story line from marvel alliance 2 on the ps3 and spiderman web of shadows also on the ps3 with other elements written in.(razial)
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from daveykins
Review:
Enjoying immensely

Very good so far!
Review By [daveykins] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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