Wow I really love the interaction between Sup and Lyri. Amazing.
"How great is man that God made, even in his limitations he can be limitless. Achieving astounding things, capable of great passion and compassion. If it is in him to do."
Comments from author:
Who said that?
Review By [christytrekkie] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Close Encounters" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job so far, I hope you'll add more soon and I hope that there will be a comtinuation of this chapter.
-Do you take suggestions?
Comments from author:
yes, I do take suggestions...however, I make no promises. Still, feel free.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [7 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Close Encounters" from RevDorothyL
Review:
'"Are you okay?" he asked her, hoping her super-speed trip hadn't caused any damage, possibly to her brain.'
That line cracks me up every time!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 May 10] • Not Rated