Wow, poor Hank in the alternative timeline. Course I feel bad that Buffy tried to save her mom's life and accidentally pushed her in front of another car. Seems rather unfair. Wonder what changes have gone on while Buffy was in a coma.
Review of chapter "One Month Anniversary part 2" from mmooch
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Aww, loving the extra-sugary goodness of this couple. Nice backstory for explaining Buffy's fighting skills - even if it was not a pleasant one. Three cheers for the best honorary big brother in the world, Corny!
This is cute. I have a nitpick though: dorothy hamill or any one in her time would never have done a triple Axel. Only a few recent olympic skaters have done that. I'm not even sure they did triple toe loops. Skating was very awkward back then. Hope you keep going. Tracy and Seaweed had great chemistry in the remake.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. As for the Ice skating what I know about it you could write on a dime. I just that move and it stuck in my head. Yes Tracy and Seaweed will be a couple. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [23 May 10] • Not Rated
Is there a reason you repeated the first sentence? Well anyway, loved the stunned Link when he saw Buffy; can actually picture it. And I'm glad that Buffy won't be a dancer on the show, but Corny's assistant; should make things more interesting.
Comments from author:
I don't know how it got there twice but it should be fixed now. Things will definitely be interesting. Thank you for reviewing.
I like this story. It is nice to see Buffy interacting with her father and having him worry about her instead of having him be a deadbeat. Her father is a lawyer by the way. Plus I have never seen this crossover done before so it is a nice twist.
Review By [danielbuffyfan] • Date [11 May 10] • Not Rated
you asked what job buffy's dad has, well i rgink he was a lawyer, good story so far.
Review By [lacthryn] • Date [11 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting Link Larkin" from mmooch
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It's been a while since I've seen the movie, but if I remember correctly, Tracy and Seaweed seemed to have better chemistry than her and Link. Maybe it was just the way Link was portrayed. Cool that Buffy gets a good dad - even if it means her mom is dead.