Great chapter hawklan, I really liked the byplay between xander and faith you have created here. It has a really easy going nature and had I seen it on the show would have loved. The teasing nature is also good, it sounds like xander and faith my end up in smallville in time and meet clark, that would be interesting. Would they suspect him of been different or like so many others would they be blind to the truth hitting them in the face. I hope faith actually does tell chloe what went down with the love spell, I'd love to see xander's reaction and chloe's. keep it up(razial)
Review By [Razial] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Strangely enough I think I have seen this story somewhere before but I can't quite place where, anyway I loved it very well done and the humour of xander is just right Hawklan. I hope to see more of this fic soon
david
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probably over at Tenhawk's ficsite were I am posting my stories also *g*
Review By [Razial] • Date [21 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Don't like the wrap around story at least add a little more exposition to let the reader know that they have walked into a bar with food. Do like the past tense stuff.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 May 10] • Not Rated