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A Cat, a Dragon, and a Diverted Fate

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Review of chapter "A Girl Needs A Knife" from demonichellfire
Review:
continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
That's the plan.
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [19 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Girl Needs A Knife" from demonichellfire
Review:
what facts I'm a big X-Men fan

What attractions
Comments from author:
Actually, the details were more to do with the locations of different stores and attractions than X-Men stuff. But thanks for the offer.
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [26 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You're Not Alone" from Netchka
Review:
Cute story. Hope to read more soon.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You're Not Alone" from demonichellfire
Review:
Note great story only bone I have are the fact that Kitty knows of vamps she was possessed by Drac's daughter for God sake in the mid 80's. Also are you planning on continuing this story because I'd love to read more

Edit: If it's about the twin cities I'm a native

For those who don't know renfest is short hand for Renaissance Festival held in Shakopee MN took a few seconds myself never seen short hand for it before.
Comments from author:
Yes, Kitty knows about vampires, but the ones she's encountered were based on the classic Dracula. No facial distortions, and no bursting into dust. It'll get straightened out eventually, and no the story isn't abandoned. I just hit a block that got compounded by real life and I didn't have time to fact-check a few details for the next chapter.

Edit: Twin Cities? I might be at the RenFest again this year.
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You're Not Alone" from Ltlconf
Review:
Howdy,

Loving this story. Kitty is young enougth to relate to a teen Faith and looks 'average' enough that any display of courage and skill only serves to buck Faith up and boost her confindence. Best of all, unlike a certain other band of heroes, Kitty isn't talking down to Faith, treating her as an equal, and making a real effort to see pass Faith's emotional armor...just like a good leader and teacher should...and she's taking Faith to a Red Sox game!

Please keep at it.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I figured with friends like Illyana and Rachel, Faith would fit right in. And Kitty really can't say much about Faith being too young, considering she fought tooth-and-nail to stay with the regular X-Men instead of being placed with the New Mutants at a younger age. She was trained by Wolverine, and in one issue, he made a comment about boys her age (14) and younger serving aboard ships up to a few decades earlier.

The baseball game will be fun for them.
Review By [Ltlconf] • Date [26 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You're Not Alone" from Dragonelf
Review:
Nice chapter.

Your version of Lockhead is very amusing.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Crisp::

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- King Solomon
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Comments from author:
Thank you.

I'm relying on his personality and behavior from the Excalibur comics.

And you have review number 42.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You're Not Alone" from draconis
Review:
Great story. Has potential to be a lot of fun.

Loved the Douglas Adams reference.

Two hot chicks with superpowers plus a snarky dragon with heat. Party on.

"The Worst of the Worst" won't know what hit him.


edit to add:
Oh, and now in addition to wrestling alligators while naked, Faith can now add chasing dragons while naked. I sense a theme...



Edit: Response to author's comments...
I prefer my and Xander's interpretation vis-a-vis the alligator wrestling. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks and congrats on being the first person to specifically point out the Douglas Adams bit.

Although it was naked slaying in Boston. For the alligator story, Xander asked if she was naked and her comment was that the alligators were naked. I don't think Cordelia was all that amused.
Review By [draconis] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You're Not Alone" from yrfgd
Review:
I've been hoping that this one would come back to life. The inclusion of Kitty into Faith's life should/could have some interesting consequences.
Comments from author:
Nope, it's not dead. Slow, but I have too many ideas to let this one die.
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You're Not Alone" from AllenPitt
Review:
Wow, Kitty was taking a real risk there, Faith has been a loner up until then...but it's before all the bad stuff that happened in Sunnydale, so she's more open at this point, I suppose. Still pretty damaged emotionally though...
Ah, Mr. Trick and his modern computer stuff. I liked that character."Dinner's here!" (when pizza boy arrived)...
I have to figure that 'sooner or later' the Council will be searching for her, using mystical means to locate, but that won't be for a while, probably. They're not all that competent. (Picture Wesley as a 'rogue demon hunter' searching for Faith across America on his motor cycle). Vroom!
Comments from author:
Faith may have been a loner but she did tend to latch onto anyone who reached out to her.

Kitty vs. Trick over computers is going to be fun.

As for the council, I have a few ideas there, especially with the connections Kitty made while part of Excalibur.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You're Not Alone" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Minneapolis' Bloomington suburb contains the Mall of America. Among the many shops, there are some sports-oriented venues, in particular *Team Choice (Home of the Sports Fan)*. If they come across it, there'll be Red Sox swag she can use.

Incidently, there's a fanficcer calls herself Persiana13 at fanfiction.net who likes to allow comics characters to be a bit.. over the top in regard to sports. I call particular attention to *Opening Day*, as the Red Sox are involved. Also not to be missed are Red Witch's *No Joy In Mudville* and L1701E's *One Great Day In Boston!*. (Apparently, seeing these people lose their minds about sports is amusing. I'm still looking around for one where Emma of the Boston Frost clan loses it. You know someone's written it by now..
Comments from author:
How did you guess where they're going?

I've been to the Cities many times (I live in Minnesota). I'd considered the Mall of America, Valley Fair, and Nicollet Mall as possibilities for the next chapter and decided the Mall had the most potential for the kind of mayhem I have in mind.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You're Not Alone" from JediKnight
Review:
Great work on this new chapter, I hope you'll add more soon.

-When might you have Faith get to Sunnydale?
Comments from author:
Thanks.

They'll hit the 'Dale eventually, but I still have a few things to toss at them before the get there.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Journey of the Sorcerer" from lunalurker
Review:
This is just wonderful and I can't wait for more! Will there be more soon? I hope so, because this pairing is working out even better than I thought it might at the beginning.
Not that I'm horribly biased, since Kitty and Faith are two of my favorite characters. Ahem.
Thank you for writing!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you think the characters are working. I like both characters, but Faith's been harder to work with, probably because there's not as much material, especially early.

As I said in the chapter notes, I just started classes again, so I can't make any promises about when the next update will be.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [30 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Journey of the Sorcerer" from LeaFairy
Review:
Really great third chapter! I loved Faith running after Lockheed for her towel completely naked without any shame. Hehe. Hilarious and very her :)

I'm also loving the interactions between Faith and Kitty and I'm really looking forward to see what happens next with them traveling together. I also like that this is set before Faith got to Sunnydale and met the Scoobies who sent her completely over the edge. It's a good change for her to actually have someone who cares about her for once-- she really never had that before.

Anyways, I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I remembered the naked slaying story when she first met the Scoobies and figured 'Why not?' That part was fun to write.

And I'm glad you liked how Faith and Kitty interact. There really aren't enough pre-Sunnydale stories about Faith.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Journey of the Sorcerer" from DireSquirrel
Review:
I liked this concept when it started and I like it more now.
Review By [DireSquirrel] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Journey of the Sorcerer" from Alastor
Review:
Glad to this one updated, Kitty was always one of my favorite characters and Lockheed is just pure epic win anyway you look at it.
Comments from author:
Mine, too. And you really can't have a comic-based story with Kitty and not include Lockheed unless it's pre-Brood.
Review By [Alastor] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Not Rated
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